Pandita Sietesantos Poet Personification

Spring

Spring

As Dark-Eyed Junco birds head north I know,
you’re not far behind with warmer weather in tow.

With an experienced artist’s colorful brush,
you skillfully paint away winter’s gray slush. 

Bringing sweet sunshine and cleansing rain,
ravaged Earth you renew with rainbows again.

Crocuses yellow and white are brightly blooming,
oh my goodness, you are absolutely amazing! 

Even the rhythmic tap, tap, tap of woodpeckers
tell me you are here – what mesmeric music to my ears.

Wrens return building nests and spreading their wings,
flying high in your blue skies as they joyously sing.

Coming alive at the wave of your magical wand,
my elated heart soars and I feel superbly grand.

I love your cool breath so fresh and tender,
and light butterfly kisses that you gently render.

But my dearest Spring, as much as I enjoy being with you,
I have a jealous lover, Summer - so this has to be adieu.


01/03/2015 
 

Contest:      Seasons
Sponsor:     Shadow Hamilton
Placement:  1st

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Susan Ashley June 24, 2019 at 8:36 PM My dear Pandita, I was swept up and away by the enchanting imagery of your beautiful personification of Spring. Your last couplet's twist made for an excellent finale. Congratulations on your wonderful placement in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes and hugs always, my lovely friend.. ~Susan

Funom Makama June 4, 2015 at 10:46 AM What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##. Pandita Sietesantos June 5, 2015 at 8:04 AM Funom, many thanks for your wonderful superlative compliments, support.and rating! I am very happy that you enjoyed this one! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2015 at 9:22 PM Pandita, congratulations on your Awesome Season win. ~LINDA~ Pandita Sietesantos January 12, 2015 at 10:19 AM Hi Linda, thanks very much for stopping by with your kind comments and compliments which are so appreciated! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Laura Leiser January 10, 2015 at 5:26 PM Your descriptive imagery enthralls the mind and heart as we look eagerly toward the Spring! Thanks for sharing! Pandita Sietesantos January 11, 2015 at 1:15 PM Laura, thank you for your lovely visit and kind compliments! Warmest wishes to you! Pandita.

Harry Horsman January 9, 2015 at 9:37 AM wow oh so visual, one can feel the sentiment here... Pandita Sietesantos January 9, 2015 at 10:04 AM Harry, many thanks for your wonderful compliments and support. I am very happy that you enjoyed this one! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Eve Roper January 6, 2015 at 8:26 PM Beautiful descriptive write, Pandita, I love the last line. Congratulations on your win. 7 my dear friend Pandita Sietesantos January 9, 2015 at 7:39 AM Dear Eve, thank you so kindly for your continued support and always sweet compliments. I am so happy that you enjoyed this piece and gave it such a high rating! Enjoy a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita.

Ken Carroll January 6, 2015 at 2:44 PM Uplifting write Pandita..Buen trabajo! Pandita Sietesantos January 9, 2015 at 7:41 AM Thank you, thank you, Ken! My friend, I always appreciate your kind comments and wonderful compliments. Have a great weekend! Pandita.

Funom Makama January 6, 2015 at 11:38 AM lovely... lovely... lovely...Great and lovely poetry... Happy new year! Pandita Sietesantos January 9, 2015 at 7:42 AM Hey Funom, my phenomenal poet friend! Happy New Year to you and blessings! Many thanks for the lovely, lovely compliments which made my day! Best wishes always. Pandita.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 6, 2015 at 12:27 AM Wow lovely on spring Pandita! Congrats on super win! Wish u a very happy new year my friend!Thnx for ur visits to my page! Pandita Sietesantos January 7, 2015 at 3:35 PM Many thanks, Dr. Upma, for your congratulations and wonderful compliments. I am very happy that you enjoyed this one! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Debbie Guzzi January 5, 2015 at 7:54 PM It was hard to pick I like all the seasons, I don't move because I LIKE 4 seasons. Great use of sound. Congrad’s on your win. Light & Love Pandita Sietesantos November 19, 2015 at 12:38 PM Hi Debbie, I didn't get an alert for this and just came across your wonderful compliments and kind congratulations! Please accept my belated appreciation! Warmest regards. Pandita.

John Lawless January 5, 2015 at 5:29 PM Congrats on the win Pandita, well done Pandita Sietesantos November 19, 2015 at 12:39 PM Hi John, I didn't get an alert for this and just came across your wonderful compliments and kind congratulations! Please accept my belated appreciation! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Paul Callus January 5, 2015 at 4:02 PM Well done Pandita! This is a beautiful way to flirt with spring! Pity you also have summer in tow...bit hard to cope with both! Congratulations on your top podium win!!! hugs // paul Pandita Sietesantos January 7, 2015 at 3:48 PM This is what you would call "torn between two lovers!":-). I thank you so much, my friend for your always sweet compliments! Warmest regrds. Pandita.

Andrea Dietrich January 5, 2015 at 1:38 PM the ending of this was superb. I too am a lover of summer's. He has MANY of us mistresses!!! I see this one won too. BIG congrats. Pandita Sietesantos January 5, 2015 at 1:42 PM Heheheheh:-)! Yes, Summer has quite a harem-LOL! I always appreciate your kind feedback and lovely compliments! Pandita.

Sandra Haight January 5, 2015 at 11:37 AM Congratulations, Pandita, for your nice win for your beautiful Spring poem. The last two lines were brilliant as an ending! Hugs, Sandra Pandita Sietesantos January 5, 2015 at 11:59 AM Many thanks, Sandra, for your congratulations and wonderful compliments. I am very happy that you enjoyed this one! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Maurice Yvonne January 5, 2015 at 11:09 AM Congratulations on your top win with this poem, it sings beautifully! Pandita Sietesantos January 5, 2015 at 11:44 AM Hi Maurice, I thank you kindly for your congratulations and wonderful compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Debra Squyres January 5, 2015 at 9:33 AM Your poem has a spring in its step... a joyful and delightful Spring in this poem it sings !!! Love it!! Congrats on your win.. wonderful couplets !! Pandita Sietesantos January 5, 2015 at 11:43 AM Debra, thanks very much for stopping by with your kind comments and compliments which are so appreciated! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Dr.Ram Mehta January 5, 2015 at 9:18 AM Lovely write on lovely spring, congrats on the win, Pandita Pandita Sietesantos January 5, 2015 at 11:40 AM Many thanks, Dr. Ram, for your kind congratulations! I'm glad you like this piece! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Shadow Hamilton January 5, 2015 at 7:44 AM lovely spring poem Pandita congrats on win hugs Pandita Sietesantos January 5, 2015 at 11:39 AM Hi Shadow, thank you so very much for selecting my poem for a top spot in your contest! This just infused my day with a sweet touch of Spring! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Jan Allison January 5, 2015 at 7:42 AM Dropping back with my congrats Pandita:-) Hugs Jan xx Pandita Sietesantos January 5, 2015 at 11:30 AM Thanks so very much again, Jan! I really appreciate it! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Jan Allison January 4, 2015 at 10:01 AM I too wrote about spring Pandita beautiful imagery and personification - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Pandita Sietesantos January 4, 2015 at 3:52 PM Hi Jan, it is nice to be in such good company! Many thanks, my friend for the lovely compliments and kind wishes. Warmest regards. Pandita.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 4, 2015 at 5:20 AM we have same fave PAndita.. :)! I so love spring too.. :D! HAppy new YEar.. :D Nice seeing you round again.. God bless.. :)!.. olive eloisa Pandita Sietesantos January 4, 2015 at 3:48 PM Hi Olive, it is so lovely to see that we chose the same season to pay tribute to! Thank you so very much for visiting! I wish you a most blessed and happy 2015! Warmest regards always. Pandita.

John Fleming January 4, 2015 at 1:52 AM Very "Vibrant", Pandita! I enjoyed the view!! :) john. Pandita Sietesantos January 4, 2015 at 3:45 PM Thank you, dear John, for your wonderful compliments which are so very much appreciated. Let's visit from time to time. Best wishes. Pandita.

Kika Ayala January 3, 2015 at 10:43 PM Hi Pandita, I really love this lovely Spring piece! Well done, my friend - very descriptive and enjoyable! Have a very happy New Year. Kika. Pandita Sietesantos January 3, 2015 at 10:54 PM Hi Kika, I am highly appreciative of your lovely compliments. Thank you so very much! Best wishes for the new year and warmest regards. Pandita.

Dorian Petersen Potter January 3, 2015 at 10:41 PM Beautiful pen Pandita ! I really enjoyed your pretty piece on Spring my dearest friend. A 7 from me! Have a wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D. Pandita Sietesantos January 3, 2015 at 10:53 PM Hi Dorian, I truly appreciate your continued support and high praises which encourage me so much to try to do better all the time. Thank you my friend, for everything! Warmest regards and best wishes always. Pandita.

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen January 3, 2015 at 10:36 PM Beautiful spring! Nice one.Regards. -Safa Pandita Sietesantos January 3, 2015 at 10:46 PM Hi Safa, many thanks for stopping by and complimenting my work. I really appreciate it! Best wishes for a wonderful 2015! Pandita.