Spring

Spring

After the clouds broke
on the shimmering puddle
Streaky sunshine danced



6/26/2014

springhaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

July 10, 2014 at 11:25 AM

Amazing imagery...PD

David Mohn

June 29, 2014 at 8:12 PM

Love the visual John...congrats

Nette Onclaud

June 29, 2014 at 3:58 PM

a lively dance of a 'ku, john.. amazing !cheers to you on your fine win.. hugggs

Donna Jones

June 29, 2014 at 1:09 PM

Puddles after a spring shower...awesome! Congratulations

Pandita Sietesantos

June 29, 2014 at 11:21 AM

Hi John, this is such a beautifully descriptive write! Huge congratulations to you on your great win! Warmest regards.

Arlene Smith

June 29, 2014 at 9:13 AM

congrats on a great win, John... hugs.. Arlene

Elaine George

June 29, 2014 at 6:13 AM

You have painted a very vivid picture with this spring Haiku. Many congrats on your win. Elaine

John Lawless

June 29, 2014 at 7:37 AM

Thanks for reading and checking in Elaine, always appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

June 28, 2014 at 11:56 PM

oh gosh, I skipped right over yours as I went down my winner list giving congrats.Good thing I looked it over one more time. Yours was sure a cute little haiku, John. I liked the alliteration and the original thought of that last line. congrats in my contest (a suggestion for you. don't capitalize the lines. Well, if you ever try to publish, they won't take them that way. I'm trying to spread the word on that!!)

John Lawless

June 29, 2014 at 7:37 AM

Andrea, thanks for the info on the caps and thanks for your support.