Spring

Spring Newness Alluring Astonishing Accommodating Longings emerge, ignite Thoughts of romance, amore Birds seek a mate, build a strong nest Tulips green leaves penetrate the earth Blossoms emit fragrance that says come love

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2014 7:21:00 AM

Oh, this is just beautiful. I love the way you carry the newness.... a delightful etheree

Joseph May

Date: 3/25/2014 2:02:00 PM

Lovely write Sara....best wishes

Jack Horne

Date: 3/23/2014 2:40:00 PM

love this beauty, Sara

Charlene Mccutcheon

Date: 3/22/2014 9:48:00 PM

Hi Sara, I am a new member to Poetry Soup and found your poem. It is lovely and such a good write. Thank you for sharing your talent and such an uplifting poem. I really love this form of poetry that I have just been introduced to.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/22/2014 4:44:00 PM

Beautiful poem Sara. One can feel the allure of spring hanging down from the worded tree which you so carefully nurtured to form your poem. // paul

Kelly Deschler

Date: 3/22/2014 4:27:00 PM

You beautifully captured the essence of spring, and the romantic side of nature at that time of the year. A wonderful write, Sara!...Thank you very much for the kind visit. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2014 2:16:00 PM

Is your princess a kind of doggie, Sara? Gosh, she must love you so much!! And reading this etheree, I would say you did a super job for a spring contest poem!!

John Loving Iii

Date: 3/22/2014 10:27:00 AM

You got the fever. Been working and paid. Thanks for all your encouragment. You've always been a special friend. John

Larry Berdoo

Date: 3/22/2014 8:41:00 AM

Very Stylish with words, Mrs. Kendricks. Yes, spring does bring out the romance in many. From where I sit, it did something special to your heart, as you share it with us.

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/22/2014 7:56:00 AM

This is such a beautiful and enlightening write my friend! I really loved reading this delightfully Spring enhanced poem this morning! You have amazed me by the splendor of this wondrous piece! What a grandiose poem, Great Work!! I have been experiencing internet problems lately so that is why I haven't been around! I probably will be without my internet Monday and Tuesday next week as they are trying to fix my problems! Just thought I'd let you know!