Spring 2024 Data

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Poetic Form: Etheree
Inspired: 2024 February 14

*4th Place*
A Spring Etheree
Contest Judged: 2024 March 03
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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"Predictions were for 2023 & 2024: "Again, heat exposure will hit many communities, death toll significant, take precautionary measures," ... by Poet Shift Winter into Spring and the first day will bring the Vernal Equinox and Groundhog Day pled an early Spring year above norm temps in northern parts late El Niño stretched warmth goes soaring Twenty-Twenty-Four Warmth Openness Signs

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/8/2024 2:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your winner in Tania's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Been a rainy spring here in the south. Sara K

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/8/2024 8:19:00 AM

Appreciate it, Sara, but I'm unsure of that pesky underground groundhog, perhaps a rabbit out of a hat, eh! Aloha, William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/4/2024 9:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your very creative Spring Etheree write. Spring will be here very soon. The best time of the year.... Have a wonderful day/week writing away.........

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/4/2024 1:31:00 PM

A wondrous word Thank You, Paula, and blessings too. Aloha, William

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/3/2024 12:50:00 PM

Hilo, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative poem!

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/3/2024 2:00:00 PM

Thanks, Tania, my friend, Aloha, William

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/14/2024 5:56:00 AM

Delightful anticipation of spring, my friend. So well crafted!

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/14/2024 9:44:00 AM

Spring is here--well, northern hemi on the 19th--Vernal Equinox, Vijay, glad you're here/posting here, my friend, Aloha, William

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/14/2024 5:08:00 AM

I hope the data and predictions to which you alluded come true. Thus far, we've had a mild winter here in Texas...whatever the reasons...I'll take. I love the Etheree form! Have a great day.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/14/2024 9:39:00 AM

Sadly, some 2,000 heat related deaths 2023, second highest since 2021, mostly affecting California/Arizona. This Etheree turned out decent, wow. Aloha, William