Spring

Soft sun and gentle rain Penetrate earth’s mantle Rejuvenating life, long dormant In winter’s grasp; Nature wakes and a new Generation of life begins.

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/4/2010 12:57:00 PM

A wonderful poem filled with hope. Well deserving of its first-round success in the Soup contest, Janette. Congratulations! Love, carolyn

Suresh Iyer

Date: 6/4/2010 5:42:00 AM

Congratulations Janette Nice Poem

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2010 10:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Janette. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Paul Stacey

Date: 6/1/2010 5:23:00 AM

A lovely take on spring that i realy enjoyed. Especially having witnessed it in the last couple of weeks and then seen it put so well into words by you.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/13/2010 6:35:00 PM

Congrats Janette on "Spring" being featured. Vince

Margaret Foster

Date: 4/12/2010 5:39:00 PM

New beginnings Janette, congrats on being featured....well done...Margaret

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/12/2010 11:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your very nice Acrostic form. Wish you more success. Ernilando

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/12/2010 10:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Janette. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/12/2010 4:58:00 AM

Congrats Janette on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful choice to feature and share this breath of Spring..luv.. Linda-Marie..

June Ellen Smith

Date: 2/12/2010 11:58:00 AM

I love rain and the way it makes me feel. Good read. I live in Las Vegas, NV so we rarely get snow in the winter, just rain. Ellen

Colleen Bono

Date: 2/9/2010 7:38:00 AM

Very nicely said.Thank you for your comment on my featured poem.Hope you have a great day.

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 2/2/2010 5:01:00 PM

Beautiful lines realizing the approach of Spring. Thanks for your comments on my poem MY Dream Love. Best wishes and love Ravindra

Elaine George

Date: 1/27/2010 8:51:00 AM

Beautiful Acrostic, Janette. thank you for sharing your poetic talent with me today. Love, Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 1/27/2010 8:26:00 AM

Lovely poetry Janette.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/27/2010 5:55:00 AM

Downright beautiful Janette. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol