Spring

Soft sun and gentle rain
Penetrate earth’s mantle 
Rejuvenating life, long dormant
In winter’s grasp; 
Nature wakes and a new
Generation of life begins.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 12:57 PM
A wonderful poem filled with hope. Well deserving of its first-round success in the Soup contest, Janette. Congratulations! Love, carolyn
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June 4, 2010 at 5:42 AM
Congratulations Janette Nice Poem
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June 3, 2010 at 10:44 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Janette. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
Stacey Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 5:23 AM
A lovely take on spring that i realy enjoyed. Especially having witnessed it in the last couple of weeks and then seen it put so well into words by you.
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April 13, 2010 at 6:35 PM
Congrats Janette on "Spring" being featured. Vince
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April 12, 2010 at 5:39 PM
New beginnings Janette, congrats on being featured....well done...Margaret
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April 12, 2010 at 11:42 AM
Congratulations on your very nice Acrostic form. Wish you more success. Ernilando
Brown Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Janette. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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April 12, 2010 at 4:58 AM
Congrats Janette on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful choice to feature and share this breath of Spring..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Smith Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 11:58 AM
I love rain and the way it makes me feel. Good read. I live in Las Vegas, NV so we rarely get snow in the winter, just rain. Ellen
Bono Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 7:38 AM
Very nicely said.Thank you for your comment on my featured poem.Hope you have a great day.
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February 2, 2010 at 5:01 PM
Beautiful lines realizing the approach of Spring. Thanks for your comments on my poem MY Dream Love. Best wishes and love Ravindra
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January 27, 2010 at 8:51 AM
Beautiful Acrostic, Janette. thank you for sharing your poetic talent with me today. Love, Lainie
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January 27, 2010 at 8:26 AM
Lovely poetry Janette.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
Brown Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 5:55 AM
Downright beautiful Janette. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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