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Spring

soft grey clouds above, 
dancing rain on petals bright
~sun breaks through the mist~

green leaves drink the sun
~gardens dressed in vibrant hues~
life blooms everywhere

morning song begins
~ a small bird on a green  branch~
spring wakes up to shine
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Andresen Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 11:30 AM
- This is also a beautiful picture... spring is my favorite time... I enjoy reading your spring poem, thank you :) -
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 12:04 PM
Hello my sweet Anne. Thank you always for your lovely words and for coming back. I hope you have a good time❤🌹😘
Ray Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 11:28 PM
An absolute delight to walk in these lines, a path crafted with the vibrant tone of spring and lightened where it needs, then to walk softly out in a bird's greatest calling, the song....always gives me a pause, respecting the reminder.....Spring calls out, "life begins"
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 6:24 AM
Thank you so much Timothy for your lovely comment. Have a nice day🌹🙋‍♀️
Gondolf Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 7:15 AM
You paint a beautiful image of the awakening of life with your words, Maria. I enjoyed the vision. John
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 1:48 AM
Hello John. Thank you for your nice comment. Have a nice day. María. 🌹
DiMino Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 7:57 AM
Love it! Beautiful poem. A FAV!
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 12:53 PM
Hello Joseph. Thank you for your comment and the FAV. I'm happy you like it. Thanks again. Have a nice day.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 11:35 AM
Hello Maria, Spring is a beautiful season a season when everything comes to life. Hugs./Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 10:46 AM
Hello Maria, I love Spring. Everything comes to life. Hugs. /Darlene/
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 12:07 AM
Good morning Darlene. You are right about Spring. Have a nice Sunday. Thank you very much. Taje carexxxx
Buhagiar Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 2:01 AM
I wander in the mists of spring yet noticing the beauty of the season.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 6:49 AM
Hello Victor. Spring is beautiful with mist, sun and rain. It's a beautiful transition. And the joy of nature. I hope you are ok?. Thank you for your words. Have a great day and take carexxx
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