Precioso Tano Poet Jueju

Spring

Spring sunlight warms distant hills
Soft petals drift across fields
Yet cold winds shake an old door
Door creaks open, my heart yields

9th Place 
Contest Judged:  3/25/2026 11:55:00 PM
Sponsored by: Suzette Richards

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Sam Kauffman March 27, 2026 at 11:02 AM Precioso, congratulations on your win. The images of "old door" to your open heart is so creative and so visual. All the best. Precioso Tano March 30, 2026 at 12:02 PM Glad that you appreciated it!

Tania Kitchin March 26, 2026 at 1:22 PM Precioso, a wonderful poem. Great imagery with the cold door opening and spring coming to an end. Congratulations on your winning placement. Precioso Tano March 30, 2026 at 12:02 PM Thank you. Glad that you appreciated it!