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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Sweet stormless spring time - fresh breeze blowing freshness - mating time has come. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 5/22/2025 4:38:00 PM
so beautiful and uplifting Victor, I love the imagery and use of alliteration too:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/17/2025 4:58:00 AM
How soul warming and beautiful is your monoku! I love the picture youv used and also the alliterations and wordplay and the spring nature of your monoku here is so very gorgeous? Do you get seasons in malta? We dont . But its always nice to write and read about! Sending you light always! Best wishes
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 5/22/2025 10:50:00 PM
Yes we have normal seasons.
Date: 5/16/2025 1:14:00 AM
Very nice Victor, spring is a lovey time of year, when the beautiful flowers start to appear… Beryl
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Date: 5/15/2025 4:57:00 PM
Honey, I'm only counting 16 syllables, is that okay? I really like this, my mind immediately went into the gutter, wondering where the line for mating time might be! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 5/15/2025 9:38:00 PM
This was not written for a contest. Just a scribble.
Date: 5/15/2025 9:00:00 AM
Spring is a glorious time of the year. All of nature seems to be in love. Thanks for sharing this one. Sara K
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Date: 5/15/2025 3:33:00 AM
Dear Victor,this is beautifully refreshing! Your words capture the essence of spring with such simplicity and grace—it's like a gentle breath of new life. Lovely and serene!...Love and Hugs
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Date: 5/15/2025 1:05:00 AM
What a refreshing and enticing piece this is, portraying the splendor and grandeur of springtime in such a beautiful way! Love the lusciously layered words with alliteration here! Sending best wishes and light, dear Victor ~
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Date: 5/14/2025 10:07:00 PM
What an exhilarating blast of fresh springtime! So enjoyable, Victor. ;)
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Date: 5/14/2025 1:11:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Spring" Monoku write. Pretty Picture... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away............
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Date: 5/14/2025 12:31:00 PM
And I hear the quail's song every morning. It's an enjoyable time of year.
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Date: 5/14/2025 11:49:00 AM
Hello Victor, a beautiful poem of Spring. Enjoy your day mt friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 5/14/2025 11:06:00 AM
- Lovely written, Victor :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 5/14/2025 10:22:00 AM
Just lovely! Hope you are doing well. I think of you often. Hugs
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