Spring



from her sleep, she wakes
new life bursts through from the earth 
hope and joy she brings 









By Zyrool

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Valsa George

Date: 3/16/2025 6:58:00 AM

Beautifully written haiku on spring. Spring heralds in hope and joy!

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/16/2025 7:48:00 AM

Thank you so much for the read, Valsa. I do think so, especially after a cold, cold winter. Wishing you a peaceful day, my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2025 3:12:00 PM

Very nice and I enjoyed the rhyme as well

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/12/2025 4:31:00 PM

Thank you for the read, and your kind words, Andrea. Have a great rest of the week, my friend.

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/9/2025 9:01:00 AM

Dear Zyrool, your wonderful haiku portrays the beautiful energy and optimism Spring brings with poetic finesse. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/9/2025 9:19:00 AM

Thank you so much for your beautiful words, Susan. Means a lot. Sending Blessings your way my friend.

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 3/2/2025 2:31:00 PM

A lovely haiku, Zyrool. I must adnit, this warmer weather has me longing to turn some soil.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/3/2025 5:38:00 AM

Hello Jerry, thank you for the read, my friend. You’re lucky your weather is warm, here very wet, damp and cold. Wishing you a great day and fabulous new week ahead.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/26/2025 1:47:00 PM

Your haiku shows a lovely personification of the change of seasons that we're waiting for

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/26/2025 3:47:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Hilda. Much appreciated. Springtime is my favourite time of year. Have a wonderful rest of the week.

Maria Williams

Date: 2/26/2025 3:49:00 AM

A really lovely tribute to Spring in so few words. Really lovely...Maria

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/26/2025 6:57:00 AM

Hello Maria, thank you so much for your kind words, I do love spring time, from the dullness of winter she gives us freshness and colour. Have a wonderful rest of the week. Zyrool.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/25/2025 4:36:00 AM

Hello Zyool, your Spring is a wonder of renewal, a breath of fresh promise. So few words, yet they bloom with life, hope, and the quiet joy of awakening. Absolutely beautiful. Winter Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/25/2025 6:28:00 AM

Hello Daniel, thank you so much for the visit and your beautiful words. Means a lot. Wishing you a fabulous rest of the week, my friend. Stay Blessed.

Tom Woody

Date: 2/24/2025 12:34:00 PM

A tribute to a benevolent Creator, who has placed in the human heart a never ending appreciation for beauty

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/24/2025 4:20:00 PM

Hello Tom, thank you for dropping by, we must give thanks to our creator for being so generous to us. Have a beautiful new week ahead, my friend. Stay Blessed.