Spring is a tanka on spring consisting of 5 lines of 5-7-5-7-7 on or syllables written in 24 words. Centered for aesthetic symmetry.
Image by me, silhouette of Spring.
Spring Gone is the cold wind. Now is the time of sunshine. Bringing singing birds. As spawning fish run up stream. Traversing rapids to home. By Josehf Lloyd Murchison
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