Spring

The birth of anew, With songs of the warm sunshine; Sunset on Winter.

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Date: 9/14/2009 12:25:00 PM

The seasons give us poets and writers so many themes and topics to write about, nice write>>James

Date: 4/28/2009 9:09:00 PM

I loved the last line. Beauty image. Thanks for your comments also. Nice to meet fellow poets.

Date: 2/10/2009 8:38:00 PM

I can't wait for the sun to set on Winter. I love the warm time of the year...Raul

Date: 2/10/2009 8:25:00 PM

love the picture you painted here...good Haiku, love the 'Sunset on Winter'

Date: 2/4/2009 12:13:00 AM

nice write. . .best wishes ~*Breana*~

Date: 2/3/2009 9:57:00 AM

I'm feeling the warmth of the sun, on this cold snowy day! Love, Shar

Date: 2/3/2009 3:07:00 AM

Sunset on Winter is a great line, good job. Tyler

Date: 2/3/2009 12:50:00 AM

Like the hope in L3 Abe.Rgds Brian

Date: 2/2/2009 8:09:00 PM

Nice haiku, I can't wait for spring to come, I'm freezing day and night..God Bless*Tyesha

Date: 2/2/2009 4:48:00 PM

Yeah for the sunset on winter, Im ready for it to be over. Laurie