Spring


buds burst like rainbows
~
vibrant ribbons of colour
~
first streamers of spring


written 1st January 2021

Syllables Per Line:	5 7 5

Premier Contest Hi-Ku (5)
Sponsor Brian Strand
8th PLACE

colorrainbowspringhaiku

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Line Gauthier

March 22, 2021 at 6:58 AM

charming, Ann ~

Ann Gilmour

March 23, 2021 at 2:46 AM

appreciate your every word x

Susan Ashley

January 6, 2021 at 6:32 PM

Dear Ann, your beautiful haiku bursts with vibrant, lush imagery. Your artistic pen is delightful, my dear friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes and happy new year. May it be filled with happiness, health, inspiration and poetry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Ann Gilmour

January 7, 2021 at 2:29 AM

Thank you so much dear Susan for your sweet words have truly lifted me today and I thank you. Sending wishes for a Healthy and Happy 2021 my friend ~ keep safe... With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Mark Koplin

January 2, 2021 at 10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Ann!

Ann Gilmour

January 2, 2021 at 3:53 PM

Many thanks Mark I appreciate your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sam Kauffman

January 2, 2021 at 9:58 AM

Spring is definitely a party and parade of color! I can feel the celebration in your words. Congratulations on your winning placement Ann. Hope you had a wonderful holiday season. Happy New Year. Sending you blessings of peace, joy and happiness for 2021!

Ann Gilmour

January 2, 2021 at 3:56 PM

Dear Sam thank you so much for your wonderful words; always a joy to read my friend. Wishing you and your loved ones a very Happy and Healthy 2021 and hope and pray for a better year...

Jan Allison

January 2, 2021 at 9:51 AM

an absolute delight to read Ann, spring will soon be on its way:-) my congrats on your win,. Happy New year :-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour

January 2, 2021 at 3:58 PM

oh yes my favourite time of year and it always fills me with joy. May 2021 be a better year for us all my friend ~ Happy New Year ~ with kindest thoughts and hugs Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar

January 1, 2021 at 6:39 AM

Here's hoping for spring to come. ~~

Ann Gilmour

January 1, 2021 at 6:59 AM

Yes it will be wonderful, I love the spring. I wish you a healthy and safe new year dear Victor ~ Happy New Year my friend. Thanks for your support. Hugs Ann xx

Vijay Pandit

January 1, 2021 at 6:36 AM

Beautiful imagery, Ann--just the kind of inspiration we need to start the new year. Wishing you happy 2021.

Ann Gilmour

January 1, 2021 at 7:02 AM

Ohh Vijay, so many thanks for your lovely comment my friend we certainly need something to look forward to and what better than Mother Nature's gifts. Happy New Year dear Vijay keep safe and well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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