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How lovely is when early spring turns land crops with youth verdure for honor and love hidden and broken. Nature whispers emerging from winter wholly hibernation. A hurried sun glances dressing fields. In rich blossoms- Spring 4/1/2019 Black bears emerge from their dens to refuel on spring greens and the remnants of last autumn's berries. Poetry Contest: Diminished Hexaverse Contest About Spring

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Date: 7/3/2019 8:03:00 PM
I am glad this wonderful poem got a second chance to be recognized. Congratulations on your first placement Eve. xxoo
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Date: 4/3/2019 8:12:00 PM
ohh, resplendent write, eve!...huggs
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Date: 4/3/2019 8:08:00 PM
Superbly crafted poem my friend. Love the sun dressing the fields!!
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Date: 4/3/2019 6:07:00 PM
awesome now!!
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Date: 4/3/2019 11:22:00 AM
A hymn to spring so wonderfully expressed dearest, Eve!
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Date: 4/2/2019 3:40:00 PM
I am not positive, but I think you need two lines of two syllables each before you finish with the one word. Just a heads up. Nice going though, with the poem as it is.
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/2/2019 3:49:00 PM
Wow, thank you... Hugs and hugs
Date: 4/2/2019 8:08:00 AM
A brilliant hexaverse, Eve:)
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Date: 4/2/2019 1:19:00 AM
Excellent DM; good luck in the contest.
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