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Spring

How lovely is when
early spring turns land
crops with youth verdure
for honor and love
hidden and broken.

Nature whispers 
emerging from
winter wholly
hibernation.

A hurried
sun glances
dressing fields.

In rich
blossoms-

Spring

4/1/2019


 Black bears  emerge from their dens to refuel on spring greens
          and the remnants of last autumn's berries.

Poetry Contest: Diminished Hexaverse Contest About Spring
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 8:03 PM
I am glad this wonderful poem got a second chance to be recognized. Congratulations on your first placement Eve. xxoo
Onclaud Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 8:12 PM
ohh, resplendent write, eve!...huggs
Lindley Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 8:08 PM
Superbly crafted poem my friend. Love the sun dressing the fields!!
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 6:07 PM
awesome now!!
Trifiatis Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 11:22 AM
A hymn to spring so wonderfully expressed dearest, Eve!
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 3:40 PM
I am not positive, but I think you need two lines of two syllables each before you finish with the one word. Just a heads up. Nice going though, with the poem as it is.
Roper Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 3:49 PM
Wow, thank you... Hugs and hugs
Daniel Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 8:08 AM
A brilliant hexaverse, Eve:)
Kiser Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 1:19 AM
Excellent DM; good luck in the contest.
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