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tiny newborn lambs frolicking on lush green grass - tractor ploughs in fields Date written 3/15/19 Contest Writing Challenge 2, March 2019 - Haiku- Poetry Contest Sponsor Dear Heart

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Constance La France

Date: 3/18/2019 10:51:00 AM

Jan, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent haiku and I love the images too~

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/18/2019 4:21:00 AM

Back with congrats Jan, glad the lambs have got wolly coats as its gone very cold again. Tom

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 3/17/2019 7:31:00 PM

Great haiku, great photos. Those lambs are precious. Congrats on your top win, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2019 7:41:00 PM

thanks Sandra:-) we are starting to see lots of lambs in the fields now:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour

Date: 3/17/2019 6:46:00 PM

Really enjoyed your Haiku Jan, many congrats on your top win. kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2019 6:51:00 PM

Thanks Ann:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 3/17/2019 6:34:00 PM

Jan, great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2019 6:51:00 PM

Thanks Eve hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2019 6:23:00 PM

way to go, Jan. Congratulations!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2019 6:49:00 PM

thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/17/2019 4:34:00 PM

I adore your kigo word in this sweet haiku Jan. Congratulations on your First Placement! Happy St. Patrick's Day! : ) xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2019 6:49:00 PM

I never know if I've written a real haiku Connie, have had a few published in haiku journal, I let the experts decide!:-) hugs Jan

Abdul Malik

Date: 3/17/2019 3:36:00 PM

I like your spring! Congrats.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2019 6:48:00 PM

I love this time of year!:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/17/2019 3:35:00 PM

A refreshing and sweet haiku Jan, congratulations on your winning placement!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2019 6:47:00 PM

thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll

Date: 3/17/2019 3:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jan. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2019 6:47:00 PM

thanks Warren:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/17/2019 2:56:00 PM

- Cute little lambs ... they must get their 1st place on the winning list - Congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2019 6:47:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise they will be leaping with joy:-) hugs Jan xx

Bette Bavington

Date: 3/17/2019 9:49:00 AM

Spring the smell of planting. Baby animals running around. A wonderful haiku.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2019 12:00:00 PM

thanks Bette:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2019 6:31:00 PM

great contrast and with the pictures too. Oh, the cute gamboling lambs!!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2019 6:49:00 PM

thanks Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/15/2019 12:46:00 PM

Hi Jan, That is such a beautiful "Spring" image. I've actually never seen a lamb your photo looks adorable. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2019 5:41:00 PM

thanks Alexis i love to see the little lambs they are so cute:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/15/2019 12:03:00 PM

Lovely spring image Jan, loads of lambs in fields by me yet there is talk of a storm bringing snow, let's hope it misses us and heads for Scotland lol. Tom.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2019 5:40:00 PM

Our livestock got such a hard hit in the snow of 2012 I think it was about 10% of animals perished I hope it never happens again:-( hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/15/2019 11:12:00 AM

You brought the delightful farm scene to life with your words and the photo of the lambs is adorable too. Best wishes in the contest, Jan! Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2019 5:39:00 PM

Thanks Carolyn I love to see the lambs bouncing in the fields they are so sweet:-) hugs jan x

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2019 9:01:00 AM

- Both of these things are spring for me, Jan :) - ... I was born and raised in the country :) - Beautiful ... I can smell the spring of your haiku :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2019 5:39:00 PM

We have lambs in the fields and farmers ploughing so i had to write about it:-) hugs jan xx