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Spring

tiny newborn lambs
frolicking on lush green grass -
tractor ploughs in fields

Date written 3/15/19
Contest Writing Challenge 2, March 2019 - Haiku- Poetry Contest
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Constance La France

March 18, 2019 at 10:51 AM

Jan, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent haiku and I love the images too~

Tom Cunningham

March 18, 2019 at 4:21 AM

Back with congrats Jan, glad the lambs have got wolly coats as its gone very cold again. Tom

Ann Gilmour

March 17, 2019 at 6:46 PM

Really enjoyed your Haiku Jan, many congrats on your top win. kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison

March 17, 2019 at 6:51 PM

Thanks Ann:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

March 17, 2019 at 6:34 PM

Jan, great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison

March 17, 2019 at 6:51 PM

Thanks Eve hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

March 17, 2019 at 6:23 PM

way to go, Jan. Congratulations!

Jan Allison

March 17, 2019 at 6:49 PM

thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

March 17, 2019 at 4:34 PM

I adore your kigo word in this sweet haiku Jan. Congratulations on your First Placement! Happy St. Patrick's Day! : ) xxoo

Jan Allison

March 17, 2019 at 6:49 PM

I never know if I've written a real haiku Connie, have had a few published in haiku journal, I let the experts decide!:-) hugs Jan

Abdul Malik Mandani

March 17, 2019 at 3:36 PM

I like your spring! Congrats.

Jan Allison

March 17, 2019 at 6:48 PM

I love this time of year!:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

March 17, 2019 at 3:35 PM

A refreshing and sweet haiku Jan, congratulations on your winning placement!

Jan Allison

March 17, 2019 at 6:47 PM

thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll

March 17, 2019 at 3:15 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jan. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Jan Allison

March 17, 2019 at 6:47 PM

thanks Warren:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 17, 2019 at 2:56 PM

- Cute little lambs ... they must get their 1st place on the winning list - Congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

March 17, 2019 at 6:47 PM

Thanks Anne Lise they will be leaping with joy:-) hugs Jan xx

Bette Bavington

March 17, 2019 at 9:49 AM

Spring the smell of planting. Baby animals running around. A wonderful haiku.

Jan Allison

March 17, 2019 at 12:00 PM

thanks Bette:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

March 15, 2019 at 6:31 PM

great contrast and with the pictures too. Oh, the cute gamboling lambs!!

Jan Allison

March 15, 2019 at 6:49 PM

thanks Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

March 15, 2019 at 12:46 PM

Hi Jan, That is such a beautiful "Spring" image. I've actually never seen a lamb your photo looks adorable. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

March 15, 2019 at 5:41 PM

thanks Alexis i love to see the little lambs they are so cute:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

March 15, 2019 at 12:03 PM

Lovely spring image Jan, loads of lambs in fields by me yet there is talk of a storm bringing snow, let's hope it misses us and heads for Scotland lol. Tom.

Jan Allison

March 15, 2019 at 5:40 PM

Our livestock got such a hard hit in the snow of 2012 I think it was about 10% of animals perished I hope it never happens again:-( hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

March 15, 2019 at 11:12 AM

You brought the delightful farm scene to life with your words and the photo of the lambs is adorable too. Best wishes in the contest, Jan! Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison

March 15, 2019 at 5:39 PM

Thanks Carolyn I love to see the lambs bouncing in the fields they are so sweet:-) hugs jan x

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 15, 2019 at 9:01 AM

- Both of these things are spring for me, Jan :) - ... I was born and raised in the country :) - Beautiful ... I can smell the spring of your haiku :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

March 15, 2019 at 5:39 PM

We have lambs in the fields and farmers ploughing so i had to write about it:-) hugs jan xx

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