Spring-Fest

Birds Return Spring-sensed dash Black-V-shaped flaps Chirp Trees Young-glee Offspring's home Sun-kissed Bloom coat Pleased.

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Date: 7/5/2011 2:03:00 PM

Good use of imagery in this poem. Enjoyed reading it today. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/6/2011 4:24:00 PM

You say so much in just a few words! How is your publishing venture going? Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

Cory Long

Date: 5/31/2011 5:04:00 PM

this was a great picture of birds and how they act.. I have enjoyed your write tonight. cory

James Foulk

Date: 5/27/2011 12:55:00 PM

very refreshing, enjoyed reading this creative poem.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/23/2011 2:45:00 AM

very uplifting Lanterne, Caroline. Makes me feel and appreciate the Spring natural excitement..

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/22/2011 10:54:00 PM

Very beautiful job Carline. I enjoyed this one as well. Thank you for your kind comments and reviews on my poetry. It makes me happy:D

Cory Long

Date: 5/22/2011 6:41:00 PM

I liked the words you chose for this poem.. cory

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2011 3:41:00 PM

sweet one about spring, Caroline. I liked that word you made with young-glee together. Those two words really meld! Luv, andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/21/2011 6:28:00 AM

beautifully worded the fest of Spring, caroline

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/20/2011 10:59:00 PM

* “Sounds Almost As The Raptures Post Eras Moment Amid Paradises Promise * Dear Blessed & Beautiful CarolineCecil * Short Sweeet & Pleasant Tis The Moment Brushed In Its Lovely Arrays of Colours In Visions * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Always & Forever * Sarah” *