Spread Your Wings

Spread your wings and take a chance, fully partake of life's ephemeral dance. Don't give in to doubts and fears, or you'll be left with regrets and tears.
3/19/17 For Brian Strand's March 2017 any theme two liner contest.
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De Beaulieu Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 2:40 PM
Hello Kim Merryman, I like this poem so much, it will be my favourite. This poem has a message for everyone. Have a nice day my friend.
Neumann Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 5:46 AM
I like it. Kai
Merryman Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 9:52 PM
Thank you, Kai!
Callus Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 12:49 PM
Yours is advice which should be heeded, Kim! Today's doubts could return to haunt us in the future!! ~ Congratulations on your merited win. Regards // paul
Merryman Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 9:52 PM
Thank you, Paul! I know all to well how doubts and fears can keep you from living the life you dreamed of.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 9:14 PM
Spread your wings, indeed! Grand! Congrats, Kim!
Merryman Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 9:50 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Dietrich Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 7:55 PM
very nicely worded, Kim. Big congrats to you in the contest.
Merryman Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 9:50 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
May Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 12:10 PM
Congrats on your win Kim
Merryman Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 9:49 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Ricci Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 7:46 PM
Hello Kim. Your words are so motivational and inspirational. I enjoyed the positiveness and strength. May we all spread our wings. Nice work with the rhyming. It was never forced. Good luck with the contest.
Merryman Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 10:23 PM
Thank you, Lisa!
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March 19, 2017 at 6:36 PM
Amen! :) good luck in contest xomo
Merryman Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 10:22 PM
Thank you, Maureen!
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