Debbie Duncan Poet Dramatic Verse

Spread My Wings

Faith has been broken
Tears must be cried 
If only I walked away
Sooner then later 
Did you shake me up
Or did I just bring you down

Can we make each other happy
Will we break each other down
Did we both jump into the fire
And not even care what came  

One of these days  
I'll spread my wings 
And fly away from you
Then we both can be happy

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Duke Beaufort April 22, 2017 at 6:00 PM This was written four years ago. You have covered a lot of ground since then, and much of it was in the air.

... Gigno February 10, 2013 at 10:17 AM !!!

James Foulk June 11, 2011 at 9:21 PM this was a very creative piece you wrote, and i would have thought it really happen to you, that is how real it was, i give it a ten, but we can only go up to 7. you do have a gift so don't ever stop writing. thank you for commenting on Bring on Summer. Summer vacation was something i looked forward to every year, as even kids today do also, each summer brigns on a new memory.

Matt Hunt May 5, 2011 at 6:22 PM Trust me on this one Debbie: Run....It's not worth the pain if someone makes you feel this way. R.M. Debbie Duncan May 11, 2011 at 1:30 PM This is made up out of my head,, if I had a relationship like this I would run;} I'm single ,,,,,,,,,,;} thank you for reading it ;}