Sprawl Of Quiet Stars

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Ten Lines from Ten Poems: A Contest of Silent One

inside a space where quiet trails I watch a starscape reel through the night to taste new charms of heaven's sprawl-- lucent the new light waking laced leaves like a satin ribbon twirling round; that in a hush all shadows creep sailing on an air of unconsciousness: When the white of.pristine tones cascade I sleep in the arms of dreams unrefined ... and let a north star bless my world within. ------ lines culled from: About Time A Glorious Alchemy Resting With Nature Delightful Things Playful Chant Of The Wind Into A Woodland Dream-like Silhouette Through All Seasons Someday Finding Me

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Date: 12/31/2024 3:25:00 PM
This is beautiful! I am reading again and again - so poetic, so lyrical! You have a magical quill!
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Date: 12/31/2024 10:08:00 AM
Beautiful, Nette. Way to go in Silent One's contest.
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Date: 12/31/2024 9:00:00 AM
That second stanza was what won this poem over for me.. What an amazing poem full of poetic imagery.. I can see you carefully selected your ten lines form your thousands of poems and did it so spectacularly.. This was a very hard contest to judge and picking ten was so difficult but you did wonders.. Thank your for writing for my last contest and congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 12/28/2024 4:39:00 PM
You did a great job on this. I liked your style of writing. <3
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Date: 12/25/2024 3:31:00 AM
What an experience you describe Nette, finding you. Involving Space lucent the new light and the stars affect. Such metaphor's of light in a dream state. What a dream. Your creative juices were sure flowing with this piece for Silent One's contest. Best wishes for the Contest...
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