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Sprained Ankle

no pain no gain totally true but what happens when your hurt all the time? sprained wrist sprained ankle soon i'll brake it and i'll feel a diffrent pain one of these days

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Date: 9/21/2009 2:08:00 PM
The use of "your" in the fourth line isn't accurate in usage. You should likely use the contraction "you're" to state what you wish. Otherwise, I enjoy the matter-of-fact quality here that pain is an essential element of life. Warm regards, John.
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Date: 9/18/2009 5:42:00 PM
the right kind of pain is pushing ourselves to the limits......good write!
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