Maria Fernandez-Garcia Poet Rhyme

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Spotty and Goldy

Weekend in the countryside,
a way from the noise to hide.
Somewhere to breath the air,
I'm glad I was there.

In the middle of the night
with the silence, with no light,
you can listen to a dog barking
with all the the stars sparkling
in a sky with a showing face
smiling with nothing, but grace.

Spotty and Goldy, the two cats, 
living in the old barn,
always searching for rats.
Independent in the loft,
they only beg to be loved.

Weekend in the countryside,
now the cats are beloved
walking in the sunny side

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Bill Baker September 19, 2023 at 3:51 PM A carefree life for the cats in the barn. I'm glad they got the love they needed, Maria. Thanks for sharing your experiences with us through your lovely poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Maria Fernandez-Garcia September 19, 2023 at 4:22 PM My Texan friend, I appreciate your lovely comment.

Jeff Connelly September 18, 2023 at 1:22 AM A sweet poetic story Maria. At first I was thrown off by the rhyming line scheme, if you know what I mean; but it worked itself out in the end. I also like that, since the poem is about two cats, the noise in the night is a dog barking. Very nice. Gracias Maria Fernandez-Garcia September 18, 2023 at 2:08 AM Hello Jeff. Thank you for passing by and for your comment. Have a great day!