Spotty and Goldy

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Weekend in the countryside, a way from the noise to hide. Somewhere to breath the air, I'm glad I was there. In the middle of the night with the silence, with no light, you can listen to a dog barking with all the the stars sparkling in a sky with a showing face smiling with nothing, but grace. Spotty and Goldy, the two cats, living in the old barn, always searching for rats. Independent in the loft, they only beg to be loved. Weekend in the countryside, now the cats are beloved walking in the sunny side

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/19/2023 3:51:00 PM

A carefree life for the cats in the barn. I'm glad they got the love they needed, Maria. Thanks for sharing your experiences with us through your lovely poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/19/2023 4:22:00 PM

My Texan friend, I appreciate your lovely comment.

Jeff Connelly

Date: 9/18/2023 1:22:00 AM

A sweet poetic story Maria. At first I was thrown off by the rhyming line scheme, if you know what I mean; but it worked itself out in the end. I also like that, since the poem is about two cats, the noise in the night is a dog barking. Very nice. Gracias

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/18/2023 2:08:00 AM

Hello Jeff. Thank you for passing by and for your comment. Have a great day!