Spotting a Relic

They’re tearing down a building;
All that’s left’s the concrete frame.
You can see the ceilings and the spots
That windows used to claim.

It was once a home to many -
Don’t know how or why folks left.
Maybe some received a buyout;
Others might have been bereft.

When I pass the site each morning
And I note this empty shell,
It is hard to see it as a place
Where people used to dwell.

Still today, beneath a window,
Or where one once seemed to go,
Was an add-on A/C unit
And that let the whole world know

That, though soon there’d be a building
With apartments, bright and new,
It’s replacing homes where lives were lived;
Acknowledgment is due.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rolland Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 5:21 PM
always renewing New York, things change very fast in the city, nicely done, poet Ilene
Rodrigues Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 1:59 PM
Very nice! Perhaps a real place you know. Nice that you care.
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