Spotting

flycatchers flitting 
    shifting dappled canopy~
     saplings catching spots
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Scorpio Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 5:04 PM
Purple Martins ....FTW I love they way you can take so few words and paint a mural! All my best A.S.
Anaya Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 12:48 PM
I dig bird watching, hummingbirds and the aviation shows the crows and seagulls put on for me. Sapling catching spots too! Lol Love your true to nature Haiku, Maureen que fabuloso, amiga!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 6:05 AM
I do too! Can’t help it, am always birding. My barefoot walk in the woods bore fruit that day. I should endeavour to find another haiku today, the mushrooms have been whispering lines, but they’re muffled by the toad croaks ;), xomo!
Connelly Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 11:07 AM
It seems that the birds serve you well Pigeon Tart... I mean Maureen ;)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 5:33 AM
I wish to serve them too. Oh, I don’t mean poultry, but when I do, ethically sourced, no batteries for me, chickens that can stand up without their massive breasts breaking their wee little legs. ;p Thank you dear! xomo
Allison Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 1:01 AM
fabulous imagery and great alliteration Mo:-) hugs jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 8:46 AM
Thank you lovely! The fruit of my walk in the park yesterday:))) xomo!
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