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Spot Dreams

Spot Dreams I watch his paws twitch ears upright listening his soft growls, he corners his prey even in sleep he dreams the cat can’t escape

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Deb M

Date: 5/16/2025 1:39:00 PM

I just love it when our beloved dogs dream making noises and twitching etc! Nice poem Oliver….Debx

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/16/2025 1:41:00 PM

Me too. Thanks Deb

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/15/2025 12:14:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your "Spot Dreams" write. It is fun to watch animal sleep. Have a wonderful day writing away..........

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/15/2025 6:32:00 AM

I know what you mean. I have seen this. Well written :)

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/15/2025 6:33:00 AM

Thanks Heidi.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/14/2025 7:49:00 PM

Ah, the birth of a genre, Oliver: 'Analyze Spot's Dream' --- to replace 'See Spot Foam at the Mouth' ~ Old Yeller

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/15/2025 8:21:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha. And with today's lingo: Spot can 'pass it forward.' ~ Foamin' in the gloamin'

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/14/2025 7:53:00 PM

Yep. Thanks for reading. I could do the foam at the mouth if I wrote one on Spot catches rabies

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2025 3:59:00 PM

So cute. I really like this. Use prey for pray

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/14/2025 4:55:00 PM

Good catch. Appreciate that. Thanks