Spot Dreams

Spot Dreams

I watch his paws twitch
ears upright listening
his soft growls, he corners his prey
even in sleep he dreams
the cat can’t escape
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M  Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 1:39 PM
I just love it when our beloved dogs dream making noises and twitching etc! Nice poem Oliver….Debx
Mckeithan Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 1:41 PM
Me too. Thanks Deb
Goldsmith Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 12:14 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Spot Dreams" write. It is fun to watch animal sleep. Have a wonderful day writing away..........
Sands Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 6:32 AM
I know what you mean. I have seen this. Well written :)
Mckeithan Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 6:33 AM
Thanks Heidi.
Wolf Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 7:49 PM
Ah, the birth of a genre, Oliver: 'Analyze Spot's Dream' --- to replace 'See Spot Foam at the Mouth' ~ Old Yeller
Wolf Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 8:21 PM
Ha, ha, ha. And with today's lingo: Spot can 'pass it forward.' ~ Foamin' in the gloamin'
Mckeithan Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 7:53 PM
Yep. Thanks for reading. I could do the foam at the mouth if I wrote one on Spot catches rabies
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 3:59 PM
So cute. I really like this. Use prey for pray
Mckeithan Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 4:55 PM
Good catch. Appreciate that. Thanks
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