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Spooky Night

Spooky night When on a dark rainy night, Moon had cheated the sky, No twinkle of stars in sight, Scare was at its peak high ! Faster as I walked very vigilant, Closer heard the footsteps follow, Palpitations turned me intolerant, Came trepidation, could not swallow, Reflection veiled causing a gallop, All of my strength as if it took, Science and logic seemed a big flop, Overpowered soon by the fictive spook, My systems underwent absolute shutdown, Beyond scope of thinking or a frown ! Written October 24th, 2014 For contest 'Ghost Stories' by Kelly Deschler Noe entered for contest by Linda " Old Halloween" Awarded 9th place win

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Date: 11/7/2015 12:18:00 AM
Very suspenseful! This would be a good poem to read on Halloween night... Congrats on a great win, Dr. Upma!
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Date: 11/1/2015 10:47:00 AM
Dr Upma, Congrats on your Halloween win, hope you had a wonderful one. SKAT love
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Date: 10/27/2015 8:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win my friend.
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Date: 10/27/2015 2:12:00 PM
Dr Upma :) Congratulations on your Good Old Halloween Poem. Had fun reading every entry. Stop by my latest blog "The Locked Room" in references to this contest if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~The Poet Destroyer~
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Date: 10/28/2014 3:20:00 PM
I am still on the edge of my seat.
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Date: 10/27/2014 6:48:00 AM
Never saw a scary sonnet before! Unique! Good luck.
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Date: 10/26/2014 10:48:00 AM
You captured Halloween Night very well my good doctor! Big huggsies! XXX
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Date: 10/26/2014 6:56:00 AM
Spooky night was really spooky with or without a spook. Loved your poem Upma.xxxx rajatc
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Date: 10/25/2014 2:39:00 PM
Enjoyed your ghost story, Upma. I had one ready to post for this contest, but bad weather disrupted my internet for about 30hrs and by the time I was back on air the contest had closed...then luckily reopened! gl // paul
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Date: 10/24/2014 2:02:00 PM
Very nice spooky write Dr. Sharma. I wish you the best in this contest! :) xxxxx D.
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Date: 10/24/2014 3:43:00 AM
great descriptive write Dr Sharma good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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