Spooky Night

Spooky night




When on a dark rainy night,
Moon had cheated the sky,
No twinkle of stars in sight,
Scare was at its peak high !

Faster as I walked very vigilant,
Closer heard the footsteps follow,
Palpitations turned me intolerant,
Came trepidation, could not swallow,

Reflection veiled causing a gallop,
All of my strength as if it took,
Science and logic seemed a big flop,
Overpowered soon by the fictive spook,

My systems underwent absolute shutdown,
Beyond scope of thinking or a frown !





Written October 24th, 2014
For contest 'Ghost Stories' by Kelly Deschler 

Noe entered for contest by Linda " Old Halloween"

Awarded 9th place win
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Deschler Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 12:18 AM
Very suspenseful! This would be a good poem to read on Halloween night... Congrats on a great win, Dr. Upma!
A  Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 10:47 AM
Dr Upma, Congrats on your Halloween win, hope you had a wonderful one. SKAT love
Lindley Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 8:20 PM
Congrats on your win my friend.
A   Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 2:12 PM
Dr Upma :) Congratulations on your Good Old Halloween Poem. Had fun reading every entry. Stop by my latest blog "The Locked Room" in references to this contest if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~The Poet Destroyer~
Kiser Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 3:20 PM
I am still on the edge of my seat.
Jerden Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 6:48 AM
Never saw a scary sonnet before! Unique! Good luck.
Ellison Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 10:48 AM
You captured Halloween Night very well my good doctor! Big huggsies! XXX
Chakrabarty Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 6:56 AM
Spooky night was really spooky with or without a spook. Loved your poem Upma.xxxx rajatc
Callus Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 2:39 PM
Enjoyed your ghost story, Upma. I had one ready to post for this contest, but bad weather disrupted my internet for about 30hrs and by the time I was back on air the contest had closed...then luckily reopened! gl // paul
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 2:02 PM
Very nice spooky write Dr. Sharma. I wish you the best in this contest! :) xxxxx D.
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 3:43 AM
great descriptive write Dr Sharma good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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