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discarding narrow thought flow crutch we learn directly by soft touch and what we garner we relay to the vast void in childlike play entwined thus with the universe we dance without need to rehearse" We sing heart songs making up the winged words As we go along amethyst path undisturbed Music we make brings about purple peace We are indigo instruments beautiful and unique For gold soul music is you it is me The light uses us spontaneity Painting the universe in rainbow shades Dancing romancing with step’s homemade No need to worry about a teal thing We exist to persevere life’s jade journey No need to fear making maroon mistakes Throw it in the bowl we’re making lime life cake From the sour lemons make sweet lemonade Despite discouraging demons we keep faith To trust green gut finding fuchsia way And turquoise touch in happy gypsy day

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Date: 3/7/2024 4:00:00 PM
A pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sometimes life is hard but a joyful spirit can lift us on colourful currents.
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/7/2024 8:11:00 PM
Thanks for reading Richard!
Date: 2/28/2024 11:55:00 AM
It is a nice life when we can do good things and not worry so much about each little move we make. TY!!!
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/28/2024 12:48:00 PM
Agreed! Thanks for reading!
Date: 2/28/2024 10:13:00 AM
lots of cute metaphors in this one!
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/28/2024 12:48:00 PM
Thanks for reading!
Date: 2/25/2024 5:34:00 PM
This 'spontaneity' is so well-crafted, Karen. A veritable kaleidoscope of colors. Thanks, Gershon
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/25/2024 5:52:00 PM
I appreciate you reading and your kind comment Gershon!
Date: 2/25/2024 10:58:00 AM
Your poem is a joyful ode to the beauty of existence and the resilience of the human spirit. Through its vivid imagery, uplifting language, and inspiring message, it encourages readers to embrace life's kaleidoscope of experiences with courage, optimism, and an open heart.
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/25/2024 5:57:00 PM
Thanks so much for your awesome comment which is the perfect summary! Hugs
Date: 2/25/2024 10:23:00 AM
So well well-crafted metaphoric poem about spontaneity, Karen. Your imagery as well as the wording is so well-conceived
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/25/2024 10:39:00 AM
Thanks Sotto
Date: 2/25/2024 9:49:00 AM
lovely and enchanting words, Karen. I liked this line: No need to fear making maroon mistakes Maroon mistakes is a wonderful image. enjoy your day, Sara
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/25/2024 10:09:00 AM
You are kind to comment thanks Sara

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