Spontaneity

To say exactly what I feel,
At first seems quite unreal.
What’s on my mind to be exact.
Without forethought, without tact?

To beckon my deepest thought
Not thinking whether I ought
Well, OK I will give it a go, 
what will happen I don’t know.

Thoughts sweep.
Old times creep.
Whispers remain.
Joyous refrain.

Quite unaware. 
Your blissful stare.
The dense dark.
Flights we embark.

Monumental being.
No eyes for seeing.
Cradled in glad.
Surrender to be had.

The peace dove dies.
Sorrowful cries.
Sunshine streams
Waken from dreams.

Craving for a tune.
Need to hear it soon.
Remember its name.
Now it’s a game.

I must play that song.
Not heard it in so long.
Was a favorite of mine.
Memory untwine.

Must have spontaneity.
It will bring gayety.
Protest dreaming.
Anti – war scheming.

Why wont it come to me.
That beloved Massacree.
Must hear it, I pine.
A true carving of mine.

Not heard it in fifty years.
It used to bring tears.
So much laughter.
Hidden truth comes after.

Who could the artist be?
Ahh, I know – Arlo Gruthrie.
Now I know the song.
I can play it, sing along.

Revive the peace birds.
I know all the words.
Its exactly what I want.
Its Alice’s Restaurant!

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Date: 2/25/2024 10:29:00 AM
Dear Wen, your poem is truly remarkable! The deliberate arrangement of its verses, complemented by skillful employment of rhyme, imbues your words with profound significance. I, too, yearn for tranquility. "Alice's Restaurant" is a timeless masterpiece, its relevance resounding even in contemporary times. This delightful fusion of your poem and the song is utterly captivating - an ingenious display of poetic brilliance.
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Date: 2/25/2024 11:13:00 AM
You make me so happy ! Your wonderful comments are always way better than my poems, but the enthusiasm you pour into your comments is awe inspiring Las, and it honestly touches my heart. I know my poems aren't as good as you say in your comments but you give me so much encouragement to strive to live up to your wonderful words. Thank you dear friend.
Date: 2/25/2024 7:22:00 AM
Wonderful writing. love it :) God bless you always friend. love, Gina
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Date: 2/25/2024 11:09:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Gina. I treasure your comment. Best wishes from Wen
Date: 2/25/2024 1:23:00 AM
Why don't we have more poetry like this? I love this and the connection to the song - don't think I had heard it before - such fun though! What a brilliant way to start my Sunday.. with a big smile. Love it (fav!)
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Date: 2/25/2024 1:56:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it dear Sam. Many thanks, Wen
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