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sponge cake sunrise

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 sponge cake sunrise
             reveals whipped meringue hillside
                    marshmallow cooled-down snowcap 
                             weeks before Christmas 

will Christmas bring 
          a snow covered night
            miniture sleigh and flying reindeer
               who knows, dreams might come true

Sponge cake is made with egg yolks where angel food cake is made from egg whites, therefore, sponge cake is yellow and angel food cake is white.

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Howard Kerr June 20, 2026 at 12:56 AM Words fail me, Sara, when “digesting” no pun intended a fascinating themed work such as this. An original concept indeed. Howard Sara Kendrick June 20, 2026 at 5:34 AM Thank you, Howard for the nice review of my work. I appreciate your interesting review of my work. Sara K.

Valsa George December 13, 2023 at 8:43 PM This is so ingeniously crafted with the same expertise of making sponge Christmas cakes. The picture beautifully illustrates the texture of sponge cakes and the angel food cakes. So delectable! Sara Kendrick December 14, 2023 at 4:43 AM Thank you, Valsa. Right this minute in time and space it would be nice to have a piece of cake. LOL..Your visit added a special touch. Sara K

Hiya Sharma December 9, 2023 at 1:06 AM Oh my, this is such a delicious piece with so many exquisite flavors of Christmas delights! "Sponge cake sunrise", "meringue hillside", "marshmallow cooled-down snowcap", "snow covered night" This all feels like a fairytale description, dear Sara.. Absolutely enjoyed reading this gorgeous tale, have a beautiful weekend ahead, sending you light & love :) Sara Kendrick December 9, 2023 at 2:26 AM I needed that smiley face this early morn. Thank you, Hiya. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara K

William Kelii Kekaula December 7, 2023 at 5:15 PM Well, the diet's out to pasture--hmm, cows? Alas, a kid that ne'er took to either, shakes & splits in the way. Aloha from not too far from Dec 7th Pearl Harbor, William William Kelii Kekaula December 8, 2023 at 12:15 PM Yep, it's understandably an inescapable period of our days here, though, there are no gloomy faces, just souls remembering, as it should be ... Aloha. Sara Kendrick December 8, 2023 at 4:12 AM December 07, 1945, was a horrible time for America/ns and for some people around the world. I heard on TV yesterday that it was a time of remembrance of that day. People from Japan were over here talking to our president about some kind of peace agreement and the whole time they were planning on bombing our naval base. I know all that had to be hard on my adoptive parents because their sons were in the military. Sara K

Laura Leiser December 7, 2023 at 2:17 PM Sara, this is delightful! Your first stanza made my hungry for those special Christmas delicacies! Snd the second stanza describes the special feelings of Christmas so well. Love this one! :) Sara Kendrick December 8, 2023 at 4:08 AM Glad that it stirred the hunger for those snacks and food. Isn't winter a nice time to enjoy those sweets. Thanks for dropping by and for the nice review of my work. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich December 6, 2023 at 1:17 PM Delicious sounding day! Sara Kendrick December 6, 2023 at 2:13 PM Thank you, Andrea. It could have been. LOL..Thanks for the visit and nice review of my work. Sara K

Yann Rolland December 5, 2023 at 6:08 PM it sounds delicious to me, enjoyed this elegant poem, beautifully penned take care Sara Kendrick December 6, 2023 at 4:20 AM Why, thank you, Yann. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K

Panagiota Romios December 5, 2023 at 3:08 PM A heavenly poem that made mu mouth drool…. I sometimess put out cookies and milk for Santa))).. i am sentimental.))) Love your poem and image.. No snow in CA..awww Pangie xxxx Sara Kendrick December 6, 2023 at 4:19 AM Ahhh, I bet Santa enjoys those cookies and milk. We don't get snow here very often, but it does happen occasionally usually about every ten years or so. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Silent One December 5, 2023 at 12:06 PM I'm dreaming of a white Christmas.... who knows what will happen.. I think that song is meaningless in Australia lol Silent One December 5, 2023 at 2:49 PM They don't get any snow... and also Decemeber os summer for them Sara Kendrick December 5, 2023 at 1:57 PM SO, does Australia not have snow in any parts? I have never thought about it not snowing there at all. I would think some areas are really hot. Thanks for stopping by, taking time to read and comment on my work. Sara K

Beryl Edmonds December 5, 2023 at 9:19 AM Love the comparison of sunrise to a sponge cake Sara. I’m dreaming of a White Christmas too… Belle Sara Kendrick December 5, 2023 at 1:56 PM Beryl, a heavy frost on Christmas would be quite enough for me. We don't get very much snow here and are not prepared for it. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Tom Cunningham December 5, 2023 at 8:53 AM Love your discription of the sunrise Sara, it would be lovely to see a sprinkling of snow at Christmas, seeing Santa would be the icing on the cake. Tom Sara Kendrick December 5, 2023 at 1:55 PM Yes, a Santa sighting would be icing on the cake, Tom. Thanks for the kind review of my work and for reading it. Sara K

Sotto Poet December 5, 2023 at 8:31 AM Such wonderful imagery mixed with colors and emotions is just breathtaking dear Sara. This is so well-composed smart and unique. Blessings Sara Kendrick December 5, 2023 at 1:54 PM The blessings are needed today, Lasaad. I appreciate the added wonderful review of my work. Sara K

Ink Empress December 5, 2023 at 8:19 AM Ah this is so unique and creative, is sponge cake sunrise something iv never read ever before. So clever. And i love the imagery painted throughout dear sara. It is always my pleasure reading you. Sending you light always Sara Kendrick December 5, 2023 at 1:53 PM Well, sponge cake is yellow like sunshine. Thanks for the kind review of my work, IE. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K