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Spokes

engrossed in my book -
the tunes of playful robins
whir of wash-machine
        the sunless dawn, spokes
atop oaks, pines and myrtles

2/5/2021

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2021

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February 17, 2021 at 9:52 AM

Hi Kim, This work is peerless. It blends everyday sounds with those of the natural world. Your comments on my “Gaping Hole” poem are much appreciated. Congratulations on your podium placement too Howard

February 17, 2021 at 3:37 PM

Thank you, Howard!

Victor Buhagiar

February 5, 2021 at 9:01 AM

Wheels upon wheels, a song of sound. ~~

February 5, 2021 at 10:12 AM

I need to get back to my book but once you put it down there are things to do :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

February 5, 2021 at 8:00 AM

The surrounding nicely captured, Kim.

February 5, 2021 at 8:06 AM

Thank you, Subimal!

February 5, 2021 at 7:21 AM

Very descriptive and appealing, Kim. Janice

February 5, 2021 at 7:45 AM

Thank you, Janice!

February 5, 2021 at 6:06 AM

Beautiful moments you captured, Kim.

February 5, 2021 at 6:26 AM

Thank you, Vijay!

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 5, 2021 at 5:12 AM

- Great, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

February 5, 2021 at 5:20 AM

Thank you, sweet lady!

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