Spokes

engrossed in my book - the tunes of playful robins whir of wash-machine the sunless dawn, spokes atop oaks, pines and myrtles 2/5/2021

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Howard Kerr

Date: 2/17/2021 9:52:00 AM

Hi Kim, This work is peerless. It blends everyday sounds with those of the natural world. Your comments on my “Gaping Hole” poem are much appreciated. Congratulations on your podium placement too Howard

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2021 3:37:00 PM

Thank you, Howard!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/5/2021 9:01:00 AM

Wheels upon wheels, a song of sound. ~~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2021 10:12:00 AM

I need to get back to my book but once you put it down there are things to do :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 2/5/2021 8:00:00 AM

The surrounding nicely captured, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2021 8:06:00 AM

Thank you, Subimal!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/5/2021 7:21:00 AM

Very descriptive and appealing, Kim. Janice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2021 7:45:00 AM

Thank you, Janice!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/5/2021 6:06:00 AM

Beautiful moments you captured, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2021 6:26:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/5/2021 5:12:00 AM

- Great, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2021 5:20:00 AM

Thank you, sweet lady!