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I felt the pain 
No pain No Gain
Yet there is nothing to hold 

And  I was told 
Hard works pays
But still there is no ways 

On how determination
will Get me paid 
When it comes to success there is no termination

So i'm destined to succeed
and expected to  proceed  
Expectations can lead to disappointments 

Practise makes perfect
but Nobody is perfect 
so why do I have to practise?

Please don't judge me
This life punched me
so hard  that I can't even fight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Xihluke great poem. Enjoyed reading........ SKAT **
Mlangeni Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Since you're a good writer... I know that is true
A  Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 10:40 PM
well expressed.........SKAT
Mlangeni Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 8:41 AM
Thank you....
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