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I felt the pain No pain No Gain Yet there is nothing to hold And I was told Hard works pays But still there is no ways On how determination will Get me paid When it comes to success there is no termination So i'm destined to succeed and expected to proceed Expectations can lead to disappointments Practise makes perfect but Nobody is perfect so why do I have to practise? Please don't judge me This life punched me so hard that I can't even fight

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Date: 1/21/2016 10:42:00 PM
Xihluke great poem. Enjoyed reading........ SKAT **
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Xihluke Mlangeni
Date: 1/22/2016 8:40:00 AM
Since you're a good writer... I know that is true
Date: 1/21/2016 10:40:00 PM
well expressed.........SKAT
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Xihluke Mlangeni
Date: 1/22/2016 8:41:00 AM
Thank you....

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