Spoiled Child

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Date: 9/17/2011 8:29:00 PM

Love the last line. So like a child. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/17/2011 6:20:00 PM

Knowing how to win your heart!! :) So cute this is!! Congratulations on your featured poem!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2011 9:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Caryl. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/12/2011 12:04:00 AM

congrats Caryl on your featured poem this week on PS.. awesome one to share luv..

James Fraser

Date: 12/27/2009 9:10:00 AM

Koolio piece Caryl, and i bet this relates to many of us >> James

Arany P.

Date: 3/25/2009 4:20:00 AM

so cute... lovely senryu! and thank you for your lovely words on my write... about the rhyme.. well for me the entire write should rhyme for it to be called so ... not just 2/4 lines! but some poets don't really follow that... so its basically upto you to decide! thank you for asking me... take care! ~ Arany