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Spoiled Child

unruly spoiled child
remained up past eight tonight...
giving parents hugs

Copyright © 2008 By Caryl S. Muzzey

on writing and wordssenryu

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September 17, 2011 at 8:29 PM

Love the last line. So like a child. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Carrie Richards

September 17, 2011 at 6:20 PM

Knowing how to win your heart!! :) So cute this is!! Congratulations on your featured poem!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 12, 2011 at 9:33 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Caryl. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 12, 2011 at 12:04 AM

congrats Caryl on your featured poem this week on PS.. awesome one to share luv..

James Fraser

December 27, 2009 at 9:10 AM

Koolio piece Caryl, and i bet this relates to many of us >> James

Arany P.

March 25, 2009 at 4:20 AM

so cute... lovely senryu! and thank you for your lovely words on my write... about the rhyme.. well for me the entire write should rhyme for it to be called so ... not just 2/4 lines! but some poets don't really follow that... so its basically upto you to decide! thank you for asking me... take care! ~ Arany

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