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Spoil Me

Is it that such a bad thing? To want to tell you everything? I need to hear your voice, I need that reassurance. I need you. I have you, but you're busy. I respect that but respect my need. Do i make too much time for you? Or is that me putting you first? I love you but i want to be spoiled. Just everyone in a while, i want to be the thing that comes first and feel bad for being spoiled. I want to tell you to pay attention to others because you're hung up on me. I want to feel like you really would rather be no where else. Everyone once in a while, Just spoil me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/29/2012 9:50:00 PM
so very truthful we all love to be spoiled,my wife spoi;ls me and I try to spoil her in so many ways,,she says I do so I must be somewhat successful..... anyway...Thank Youi for reading and taking the time to comment upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Taylor Thompson
Date: 3/2/2012 5:05:00 PM
haha thank you cecil :)
Date: 2/23/2012 5:24:00 PM
Very true sometimes in a relationship the other can become emotionaly neglected this poem is a reminder to always take the time to show your special some one that they are your world, A wonderful read !
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Taylor Thompson
Date: 2/27/2012 9:19:00 AM
Thank you joseph, hopefully it doesn't happen too often :)
Date: 2/11/2012 3:39:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your very expressive work..I hope that you get spoiled..Sara
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Taylor Thompson
Date: 2/14/2012 8:12:00 AM
Me too! I hope you can as well, thank you for reading! :)
Date: 2/11/2012 3:17:00 PM
I like this. I agree with what you're saying. nice poem.
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Taylor Thompson
Date: 2/14/2012 8:12:00 AM
Thank you william :)
Date: 2/11/2012 1:15:00 PM
An emotional write by you Taylor.Enjoyed the read.Thanks for your comment at my page.
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Taylor Thompson
Date: 2/14/2012 8:12:00 AM
Thank you, and thank you for reading :)

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