Spoil Me

Is it that such a bad thing?
To want to tell you everything?
I need to hear your voice,
I need that reassurance.
I need you.
I have you, 
but you're busy.
I respect that but respect my need.
Do i make too much time for you?
Or is that me putting you first?
I love you but i want to be spoiled.
Just everyone in a while,
i want to be the thing that comes first and feel bad for being spoiled.
I want to tell you to pay attention to others because you're hung up on me.
I want to feel like you really would rather be no where else.
Everyone once in a while,
Just spoil me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/29/2012 9:50:00 PM
so very truthful we all love to be spoiled,my wife spoi;ls me and I try to spoil her in so many ways,,she says I do so I must be somewhat successful..... anyway...Thank Youi for reading and taking the time to comment upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Taylor Thompson
Date: 3/2/2012 5:05:00 PM
haha thank you cecil :)
Date: 2/23/2012 5:24:00 PM
Very true sometimes in a relationship the other can become emotionaly neglected this poem is a reminder to always take the time to show your special some one that they are your world, A wonderful read !
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Taylor Thompson
Date: 2/27/2012 9:19:00 AM
Thank you joseph, hopefully it doesn't happen too often :)
Date: 2/11/2012 3:39:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your very expressive work..I hope that you get spoiled..Sara
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Taylor Thompson
Date: 2/14/2012 8:12:00 AM
Me too! I hope you can as well, thank you for reading! :)
Date: 2/11/2012 3:17:00 PM
I like this. I agree with what you're saying. nice poem.
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Date: 2/14/2012 8:12:00 AM
Thank you william :)
Date: 2/11/2012 1:15:00 PM
An emotional write by you Taylor.Enjoyed the read.Thanks for your comment at my page.
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Date: 2/14/2012 8:12:00 AM
Thank you, and thank you for reading :)
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