Notes About The Poem

Split Wide Open

In quiet, space breaks down into insight. Opposing the edge amidst deceit and blight. Imperceptible resonation is reflected back. On a hunch, or at the stroke of night track. A lethal tree is still close in the woodlands. The spirit was trailing on the kist of the tree. At first, kids looked to chip with their hands. Seep into the night in a ruddy shrunken spree. I wake up early to the Greek myth of Zeus. A vessel drifting on the Dal Lake in Udaipur. The sound of a woman sobbing in sadness. Over calm green oceans, echoes in Jupiter. She was performing in a velvety baritone. Pain in the midst of the tranquility of dawn. Endeavoring to perform the icy top in June. Mountains that frame the Kilimanjaro awn. Ghastly calamities smash and deeply devastate. I rightly fear that wide-open harm didn't recover. You can expect the best, yet I will never hesitate. My dear life depends on your choice; kindly usher. I regularly defied to bid someone to criticize. The one-sided truth was dazzling blindness. My space was thwarted in the related size. I felt as if somebody led a ruin process. Sacredness to which humankind might relate, With the moon sitting on edge of the world. Mountains meet to uncover the ornate. Smiling and radiating, from high observed. There are times when I can feel the crests fly. I'm being held down as my blood is drained. Brain scars result from ruined sight and sway. When I perish, a chasm arises in my mind. A lean, edge-on which rests one's optimism. Please be cautious of steps you split wide open. In fate, a walk on shells will be optimum. Shift much fatal shooting and be woken. I minded my name being said in a whisper. I was adducible of a hand tapping my forearm. When I swung around to direct a look closer, I found myself alone and aching for smarm. How might a heart that dorsum and delicate, Have the sway to bear a vast part desolate. But we're apt despite our humble eyesight. To discover the earth and the vast infinite. The monstrosity of the encompassing world. Encompassed by both the sight and the sound. Emotions energize the heart within the darkness. Eyes that can consistently scan such elegance.
1st Place Contest Winner. Written: June 01, 2022 This Or That, Vol 12 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

George Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 8:07 AM
Dear Lasaad, hearty Congratulations on your most deserving first place win!
Ibeh Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 5:04 PM
Wow! A showcase of poetic excellence, Lasaad:-) An instant fave for me. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a write. What a story/picture. Have a great/blessed weekend................
Kavanagh  Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 9:12 AM
Congratulations on top spot Lasaad, you put so much imagination and imagery into this poetry powerhouse, your intellectual prowess has blown us all away, and is going from strength to strength in all your works, cheers David
Poet Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 10:01 AM
David, I can't thank you enough. Your thoughtful comments that come directly from the heart mean a lot to me, and I'm happy that you like my poetry.
Pandit Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 8:26 AM
Back with BIG congrats on your TOP win, Lasaad.
Cunningham Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 6:50 AM
Brilliant poetry Lasaad, love the touch of Greek mythology, congratulations on your win. Tom
Pandit Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 4:00 AM
Kudos for writing such a long poem in rhyme, Lasaad. A mythical, mystical journey. Best to you as always my friend.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace