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Splintered Edges

I’ve written everything I’ve wrote splintered edges, leaky boat wrote and wrote and still there’s more sweat stained, cracked but trusty oar penciling in and out of shore I’ve cursed the sun, welcomed the rain beneath the bridge became the train challenged the rapids of my mind unraveled secrets still entwined within the eddy, swirl and rush of purging flight and endless fall forever rainbows joyful pall enveloping both wit and pen of poetry’s oft splintered whim John G. Lawless ©1/14/2022

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Date: 1/25/2022 2:10:00 AM
I love the happy cadence of this, and the lovely well thought-out end rhymes! Wow!
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Date: 1/18/2022 8:52:00 AM
unraveled secrets still entwined, may you have many more hushes of poetry arriving at my doorstep, thankyou John :)
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Date: 1/17/2022 9:33:00 PM
Between flight and endless fall , let more poems be born from your pen through the swirl and rush of your thoughts. Lovely ! John, love your 'splintered edges'
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Date: 1/17/2022 3:29:00 PM
Hello John ... your poem is a great poem to recite. It really does describe the life of a writer - thank you John - Lindsay
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Date: 1/16/2022 12:19:00 PM
really love the description John I can relate to every line:-) hugs Jan xx
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