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Splintered

I splintered into a thousand brittle glass You brandished a bamboo rag And with one sweep Wiped out my remains To impertinent winds I awoke feeling completely broken But you've kept some tiny cuts And will never return it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/18/2017 7:54:00 AM
Wow :) love this! xomo
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Date: 6/12/2016 5:32:00 AM
I like the deep, sad thoughts expressed here, Gabby:)
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Date: 7/27/2014 5:49:00 PM
Gabby, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 3/6/2014 2:15:00 PM
lovely poem...touching. not everything ends completely... // paul
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Date: 2/9/2014 7:50:00 AM
Very interesting theme and nice take on it. congrats on the win, nancy
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Date: 1/30/2014 5:13:00 PM
Very deep and inspiring. My first poem to read on poetry soup. Keep em comin Gabby
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Date: 1/30/2014 2:09:00 PM
powerful and deep, Gabby Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/30/2014 12:56:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Gabby- I choose your first moving written poem :)- hope you will write many more in the future :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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