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Splendors of a New World

Isn't it childish That on my way home I crunch Every single leaf?

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Faye Gibson

Date: 8/10/2014 2:40:00 PM

Congratulations on a great first place win.

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/9/2014 12:18:00 PM

haha, I used to do the same thing. Grats on your win ;)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/9/2014 10:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win, Nicole. I enjoyed reading this beautiful haiku. Excellent write with clever "AHA"! Pandita

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/8/2014 2:00:00 PM

nicole, i was awed y this.. huge congrats!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2014 11:31:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Archana Kapoor Nagpal

Date: 8/8/2014 6:56:00 AM

Beautiful and thought evoking as well. Congratulations!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/8/2014 5:08:00 AM

Truly beautiful haiku Nicole! congrats on top win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 12:47:00 AM

Nice autumnal write, Nicole. congrats on the win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2014 11:44:00 PM

this one is very interesting. As if written from a child's point of view or an adult that is just being different!!

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/7/2014 11:30:00 PM

Nicely written and a lovely Haiku Nicole. Congrats! 1st place...