Splendors of a New World

Isn't it childish
That on my way home I crunch
Every single leaf?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gibson Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 2:40 PM
Congratulations on a great first place win.
Nance Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 12:18 PM
haha, I used to do the same thing. Grats on your win ;)
Sietesantos Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Nicole. I enjoyed reading this beautiful haiku. Excellent write with clever "AHA"! Pandita
Onclaud Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 2:00 PM
nicole, i was awed y this.. huge congrats!.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 11:31 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)
Nagpal Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 6:56 AM
Beautiful and thought evoking as well. Congratulations!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 5:08 AM
Truly beautiful haiku Nicole! congrats on top win!
Mehta Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 12:47 AM
Nice autumnal write, Nicole. congrats on the win
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 11:44 PM
this one is very interesting. As if written from a child's point of view or an adult that is just being different!!
Walker  Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 11:30 PM
Nicely written and a lovely Haiku Nicole. Congrats! 1st place...
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