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Splendor of Nature

Glinting glimpse of amber delight, golden dawn arrives Enchanted by the symphonious chorus of robins’ voice As yellow daffodils swing, lilting winds in ruby sunrise When scented whiffs of pink hyacinth muse your smile Awakening you from rosy dreams gleaming in your eyes; Oh, the splendor of spring floats on wings of butterflies! Hiding in foliage of tall verdant pine, bluebirds twitter joy While merrily on red-maple tree sparrows dance nearby As purple peonies, white daisies, on green-edges beautify And standing tall in blazing colors ornamental tulips vie Hypnotizing your sight, in awe of beautiful garden paradise; Oh, the splendor of spring floats on wings of butterflies! Refracting sun rays, tiny gems glint emerald green grass While roses red, swaying merrily, adorn our side-walks Spurring crimson-crested cardinal’s euphoric air dance As flaunting graceful ambiance, a distinctive blue-jay flies Circling lily of the valley, where buzzing bees fantasize; Oh, the splendor of spring floats on wings of butterflies! As the uplifting sunbeams upon morning’s horizon rise Amid symphony of colors sensual impulses romanticize Mesmerizing lyrics of love as rhythms of hearts harmonize Hoisting tenor of passions high, blushing sapphire skies Enamored in grandeur of nature’s wondrous enterprise; Oh, the splendor of spring floats on wings of butterflies! July 30, 2020 Placed 1st: Petals, buds, blossoms, bees, birds, butterflies poetry contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 12/7/2021 7:15:00 PM
The beauty and life of spring distilled into an elixir of intoxicating sensations that i have quaffed it in a single draught and 'drunk it to the lees' . The refrain has lifted me on butterfly wings ! Arresting Vijay !
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Date: 10/17/2020 12:49:00 PM
Nothing like the splendor of nature and so beautifully described by your talented words. Have missed being here. SuZ
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Date: 8/13/2020 5:40:00 PM
I feel early summer again; beautiful, serene, just marvelous imagery. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/3/2020 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a story/poem. Spring is a great time of the year. Wish it would last longer. A great write. Enjoy your win and day.........
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Date: 8/3/2020 5:24:00 AM
Loved the last stanza very much Vijay sir. Amazing garden with lot of flowers ,birds and insects.You Muse is shining with bright hues:-) Loved each of the lines.Thanks for welcoming us to your garden sir:-) Congratulations on your deserving first place win:-)Keep writing and keep shining:-) Take care.My best wishes sent to you....
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Date: 8/2/2020 5:49:00 AM
Vijay this is beautifully hypnotizing to read! I love this. You are so talented. Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 8/2/2020 1:10:00 AM
This is again a fav for me Vijay! Your outstanding talent of weaving breathtaking imagery with soothing emotions knows no bounds. It leaps furthre with each muse of yours. Congratulations on your win my friend :)
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Date: 8/1/2020 11:25:00 AM
- A really beautiful writing, Vijay :) - Sorry I have not read this before ... glad I read it now - Congratulations on your top win :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/1/2020 10:15:00 AM
A first placing in SO's contest - how wonderful and how well crafted as you describe nature with your heart and soul! Blessings my friend, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/1/2020 10:12:00 AM
Such a beautiful picture, Vijay - "uplifting sunbeams." I think anyone who visits your garden would be uplifted in its beauty. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/1/2020 9:25:00 AM
Vijay, a beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win in Silent Ones contest.
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Date: 8/1/2020 8:03:00 AM
You described the splendor of nature perfectly, each line there is vivid imagery and you know i love that, especially withe use of light alliteration and assonance... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 7/31/2020 4:41:00 PM
Vijay, This is an absolutely beautiful poem. I like the refrain, "Oh the splendor of spring floats on wings of butterflies."
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/1/2020 4:24:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments, Mike--many thanks.
Date: 7/31/2020 2:39:00 PM
Hi Vijay, I just sent you a soup mail, let me know if you received it, it was in answer to your soup mail. thanks
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/31/2020 3:04:00 PM
Hi Vienna--no I don't see your soupmail. Perhaps you can re-send it. Much appreciate my friend.
Date: 7/31/2020 1:16:00 PM
Beautiful as always, Vijay, You have such a way with imagery, especially describing nature.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/31/2020 2:01:00 PM
So nice of you to say that Andrea--much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.
Date: 7/31/2020 9:29:00 AM
Hi Vijay, Your garden looks amazing! Thanks for showing it too me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/31/2020 2:00:00 PM
Thank you Alexis--much appreciate.
Date: 7/31/2020 5:53:00 AM
Another vividly descriptive blend of the beauties of nature and romance, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/31/2020 6:26:00 AM
Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.
Date: 7/31/2020 4:55:00 AM
A glorification of nature and beauty dearest, Vijay! Masterfully written my friend. God luck!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/31/2020 5:11:00 AM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate, as always.
Date: 7/30/2020 6:58:00 PM
This is a wonderful entry and I'm sure it will be a winner. Very enchanting and inspiring. I love spring and this poem. God bless you dear friend and best wishes for the win
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/30/2020 7:27:00 PM
Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Gina--many thanks. God bless!
Date: 7/30/2020 5:42:00 PM
"on wings of butterflies!" Your words take flight. Oh my !! This is beautiful in every way. Such vivid images you paint. Once again, you leave me in awe. This is a Masterpiece. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/30/2020 7:25:00 PM
So very kind of you my friend. I look forward to reading your feedback, always. Much appreciate, Brandy--many thanks.
Date: 7/30/2020 2:49:00 PM
Your garden is a delight to the senses Vijay with superb imagery in your lines. Good luck Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/30/2020 5:05:00 PM
Thank you Tom--much appreciate your kind feedback, as always. You are so kind, to so many!
Date: 7/30/2020 2:35:00 PM
What an absolutely beautiful poem! I'm amazed at the vivid imagery. You truly have talent my friend! A top placement for sure. Great job!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/30/2020 5:04:00 PM
That is such a nice thing to hear, Mark. I truly appreciate your visit and kind remarks--many many thanks.

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