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Splendor Is Veiled and Unveiled

A woman who can oversee a household can lead a country. By Poet
Tender frank eyes fleshy rosy lips and wispy hair, Our attitudes and longings do not postulate her. She kindles with no purpose to inflict us harm, Who can withstand her seraphic heavenly charm? Nation bestows her where the rule shifts one gender, She grows softly amid hardy buds, so slender. She aims for arty and hews her way through life, Fearful of being alone but bold fairly to wield a knife. She ushers us to places for a process to conceive, And shields from wicked gaze, that may deceive. She caresses us as a raw oyster tackling a pearl, To set us free as soldiers cries and the harsh snarl Women teach a generation, not simply men, She is the fallen asylum and nation power again. She represents the gift of nature with a creative mind, She follows each moron, emulating his quirk kind. Eve was created by God from Adam rib, He saw that man need companionship sib. They were quite a pair among critters in cavetto, And joyously strolled the Paradise meadow.
Written: March 22, 2022 1ST PLACE CONTEST WINNER TRIBUTE TO WOMEN Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Beata Agustin

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Date: 4/26/2022 10:18:00 AM
Lasaad, congratulations on your win! Your choice and use of words always amazes me. What a gift! So glad to see this gem on the winners list! Sending you Easter season blessings!
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Date: 4/26/2022 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Love your ending with Eve and Adam from the bible. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 4/23/2022 12:21:00 AM
Blend of history and reality. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/22/2022 9:40:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this ode. God bless you.
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Date: 4/24/2022 12:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Beata. Appreciate your reading, placing, and commenting on my poem.
Date: 3/23/2022 3:36:00 AM
When a woman behaves badly, the country goes to the dogs.
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Date: 3/22/2022 6:14:00 PM
A heartfelt tribute, Lassad. I like your quote--it says it all.
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Date: 3/22/2022 6:07:00 PM
Women are the true heroes of mankind, methinks. Too often, their praises go unsung. Thanks for helping right a wrong, Lasaad! :) Gershon
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