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Splendid Starfish

Starfish pearl of the cobalt deep Scale the ocean's precipice Five arms feel each white grain of sand All tips view light and dark rays In costal waters day and night Splendid starfish don't depart
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Contest: Night Creatures (4) Starfish Poet: Sara Kendrick Written: January 14, 2015
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Onclaud Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 12:46 PM
wow, a unique perspective about a starfish, sara.. thank you for being part of my contest and huge congrats..
Kayode Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 11:13 PM
A beautiful poem you have here Sara,congrats on the win...huggs
Roper Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 7:10 PM
Sarah, I love your poem, congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend Eve
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 2:27 PM
this one is very nice, Sara. Congrats to you.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 8:14 AM
A splendid starfish, indeed! Congrats, Sara...hugs, Rhonda
Roberts Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 12:31 AM
Many congrats Sarah.....Seren
A. Sharma Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 9:38 PM
What a beauty Sara! These sea creatures r real pearls u hv so well said! Congrats on big win!
Guzzi Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 7:26 PM
Glad someone remembered our underwater friends! Congrad's on your win. Light & love
Callus Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 3:02 PM
Was struck straight away by your initial two lines, Sara. Lovely poem and also a merited winner! Congratulations. // paul
Allison Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 2:21 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 1:13 PM
Sara, congratulations on your win for your very descriptive Starfish poem. Well done! Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 8:22 PM
I think your starfish just bested my rattlesnake! Lol.... Stunning tribute to the star of the ocean, dear friend... Gl in the contest!... Hugs... Arlene
Jones Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 7:31 AM
You transformed the starfish into something magical here Sarah....nice job....sure to do well in contest...
Deschler Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 3:57 PM
Your knowledge of the starfish shines in this wonderful poem. I enjoyed it, Sara! Good luck in Nette's contest!
Hamilton Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 6:28 PM
well captured Sara gl in contest hugs
A   Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 1:55 AM
Enjoyable verse. I like the starfish pic above. Luv linda
Horsman Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 11:14 AM
your knowledge of everything worldly is immense, so is your ability to tell it in poetry...
Kiser Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 4:15 AM
I'm lov'in this one...love starfish, too. Good luck in the contest.
Allison Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 4:15 PM
Such vivid imagery and a beautiful image too Sara:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 3:55 PM
Nicely done, sara, this looks like a fun one to do!
Pinet Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 2:50 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem, for it rings true and real. Emile.
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