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Starfish pearl of the cobalt deep Scale the ocean's precipice Five arms feel each white grain of sand All tips view light and dark rays In costal waters day and night Splendid starfish don't depart
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Contest: Night Creatures (4) Starfish Poet: Sara Kendrick Written: January 14, 2015

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Date: 1/22/2015 12:46:00 PM
wow, a unique perspective about a starfish, sara.. thank you for being part of my contest and huge congrats..
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Date: 1/21/2015 11:13:00 PM
A beautiful poem you have here Sara,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 1/21/2015 7:10:00 PM
Sarah, I love your poem, congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 1/21/2015 2:27:00 PM
this one is very nice, Sara. Congrats to you.
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Date: 1/21/2015 8:14:00 AM
A splendid starfish, indeed! Congrats, Sara...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/21/2015 12:31:00 AM
Many congrats Sarah.....Seren
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Date: 1/20/2015 9:38:00 PM
What a beauty Sara! These sea creatures r real pearls u hv so well said! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 1/20/2015 7:26:00 PM
Glad someone remembered our underwater friends! Congrad's on your win. Light & love
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Date: 1/20/2015 3:02:00 PM
Was struck straight away by your initial two lines, Sara. Lovely poem and also a merited winner! Congratulations. // paul
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Date: 1/20/2015 2:21:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/20/2015 1:13:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your win for your very descriptive Starfish poem. Well done! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/19/2015 8:22:00 PM
I think your starfish just bested my rattlesnake! Lol.... Stunning tribute to the star of the ocean, dear friend... Gl in the contest!... Hugs... Arlene
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Date: 1/19/2015 7:31:00 AM
You transformed the starfish into something magical here Sarah....nice job....sure to do well in contest...
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Date: 1/18/2015 3:57:00 PM
Your knowledge of the starfish shines in this wonderful poem. I enjoyed it, Sara! Good luck in Nette's contest!
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Date: 1/16/2015 6:28:00 PM
well captured Sara gl in contest hugs
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Date: 1/16/2015 1:55:00 AM
Enjoyable verse. I like the starfish pic above. Luv linda
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Date: 1/15/2015 11:14:00 AM
your knowledge of everything worldly is immense, so is your ability to tell it in poetry...
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Date: 1/15/2015 4:15:00 AM
I'm lov'in this one...love starfish, too. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/14/2015 4:15:00 PM
Such vivid imagery and a beautiful image too Sara:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/14/2015 3:55:00 PM
Nicely done, sara, this looks like a fun one to do!
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Date: 1/14/2015 2:50:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem, for it rings true and real. Emile.
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