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Splashed In the Oncoming Current

her heart was galloping like a horse i could feel without touching i listened to her chest unaided she was anxious yet happy alarmed yet content i could hear the words the endearments unsaid the mountains were moving with a sigh of relief softly divine music flowed like a river stillness of the lake invigorate throws me into a sudden ecstacy voluptuously i couldnt hold any longer i couldnt wait any further i couldnt resist and yielded to the temptation the wood was dense yet the foot steps paved by the generations the persistence of the memory helped me find the right way the solace the warmth i was waiting for i entered the dark cave with utmost care and passion without hurting kindness guided me in the narrow corridor then forgetting all softness i galloped like a stallion in the race uninhibited like a child i sailed in the ocean of love wingless flew in the blue sky weightless like a sparrow opening the unknown horizons splitting the atoms unaware bashful yet considerate splashed in the oncoming current i was lost in the river of love jarusulemaa,keethaari,labliboo mejoria,ninisoota,ohhhhhhh

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Date: 12/4/2015 5:00:00 PM
Not bad... not bad at all... The last few words, are they Estonian?
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Francis Osho
Date: 12/4/2015 8:20:00 PM
thanks pashang for reading. no they are spontaneous expression of sounds like a gift of tongues. speaking of estonian i had the opportunity to write one in estonian "sa ni armastus"
Date: 12/3/2015 12:29:00 AM
WOW, for a second there I felt it was me you were talking about. Francis, I'm kidding. A lovely poem... SKAT
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Francis Osho
Date: 12/3/2015 2:16:00 AM
yeh thanks skat.your lesson in love was kind of in the same gemre.may be i was.. you know the cosmic conscience

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