Splashed In the Oncoming Current

her heart was galloping like a horse
i could feel without touching
i listened to her chest unaided
she was anxious yet happy
alarmed yet content
i could hear the words
the endearments
unsaid

the mountains were moving
with a sigh of relief
softly
divine music flowed like
a river
stillness of the lake
invigorate
throws me into a sudden
ecstacy
voluptuously
i couldnt hold any longer
i couldnt wait any further
i couldnt resist and yielded
to the temptation
the wood was dense
yet the foot steps paved
by the generations the persistence
of the memory
helped me find the right way
the solace the warmth
i was waiting for
i entered the dark cave
with utmost care and passion
without hurting kindness
guided me in the narrow corridor
then forgetting all softness
i galloped like a stallion in the race
uninhibited like a child
i sailed in the ocean of love
wingless flew in the blue sky
weightless like a sparrow
opening the unknown horizons
splitting the atoms unaware
bashful yet considerate
splashed in the oncoming current
i was lost in the river of love
jarusulemaa,keethaari,labliboo
mejoria,ninisoota,ohhhhhhh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/4/2015 5:00:00 PM
Not bad... not bad at all... The last few words, are they Estonian?
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Francis Osho
Date: 12/4/2015 8:20:00 PM
thanks pashang for reading. no they are spontaneous expression of sounds like a gift of tongues. speaking of estonian i had the opportunity to write one in estonian "sa ni armastus"
Date: 12/3/2015 12:29:00 AM
WOW, for a second there I felt it was me you were talking about. Francis, I'm kidding. A lovely poem... SKAT
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Francis Osho
Date: 12/3/2015 2:16:00 AM
yeh thanks skat.your lesson in love was kind of in the same gemre.may be i was.. you know the cosmic conscience
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