Splash of Color

bright butterfly wings drifting ‘neath a cloudy sky a ray of sunshine written May 23, 2022

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Date: 5/25/2022 8:06:00 AM

I love butterflies. Nice Haiku, my friend. Bill

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/25/2022 9:21:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Bill. Yes, they are beautiful and bring splashes of color to our surroundings, much like flowers.

Date: 5/23/2022 1:15:00 PM

Each butterfly seems to bring a piece of heaven closer, loved this tribute to them!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/23/2022 4:27:00 PM

Thanks, Caren. I really do love butterflies.

Date: 5/23/2022 10:14:00 AM

You give the reader a summer image Milton , can't wait for those long summer days. Love to see them in the garden doing their aerial ballet. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/23/2022 10:43:00 AM

Nothing is more beautiful on a warm summer day. You aptly describe it as an "aerial ballet."

Date: 5/23/2022 9:14:00 AM

Beautiful. I can see it Milton :)

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/23/2022 9:18:00 AM

Thanks so much, Heidi. Always good to hear from you.

Date: 5/23/2022 9:14:00 AM

Nice imagery you've presented in this one.

Jenna Logan
Date: 5/23/2022 9:38:00 AM

I was honored... loved it!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/23/2022 9:18:00 AM

Aw, thanks, Jenna. I mentioned you in a poem a little while ago; I hope you don't mind. I sort of picked up on the Soup Creek theme.