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Splash How I love to see you splash grandchild. You find puddles after rain such fun. You float your paper boat with joy. I smile and I laugh to see you having so much fun. You are my gift from God my sweetest Angel child. 6-4-20 Premiere Contest N/A Splash Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann Yalto Form

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/19/2020 12:39:00 PM

Hi Connie, it is wonderful to see how simply a child can find enjoyment and the joy parents or grandparents can get out of watching them. I caqn feel the joy through this wonderful write. You capture such wonderful moments with such ease.I always used to enjoy such things when I was a child. Brings back memories. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/12/2020 3:30:00 PM

Very nice Connie. So sweet. :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 6/11/2020 9:03:00 AM

Connie, Grand child's puddle, Grand parent's joy. You've made quite a nice 'Splash' with this poem. -Richard

Paul Callus

Date: 6/9/2020 4:12:00 PM

You certainly take delight in watching your grandchild play and enjoy herself, Connie, and it shows in your words. I like the lovely accompanying visual, too. ~ Warm regards // paul

P.S. Awtry

Date: 6/9/2020 9:28:00 AM

Nice yalto Connie! Children are God's reminder to just have fun! :)

Michael Tor

Date: 6/8/2020 8:22:00 PM

Grandchildren bring us so much joy. Beautiful Connie. Blessings your way..

Sandra Adams

Date: 6/6/2020 10:40:00 PM

I could see this one... love watching the innocence of children as they splash about in the rain... wonderful write my friend! hugs :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/6/2020 5:26:00 PM

this is perfect and reminds me of my grandson. Connie, a soft and lovely write. Linda

John Watt

Date: 6/6/2020 3:19:00 AM

Really wonderful write, Connie. Splashing water was such a fun thing to do as a child, be it in the pool, the bathtub, or a puddle. Love the cute picture too. I wish you all the best in the Splash contest (and Yalto too?) Appreciate your comments, my friend. Hugs ~ John

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2020 5:44:00 PM

awww, so sweet . You did GREAT with the form, Connie. Will you also use for Yalto entry? I want to do two contests with same poem but I never know which judges do not mind us doing that. In fact, I see three contests right now I could do using one poem!!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/5/2020 2:38:00 PM

great picture to accompany this delightful poem, connie!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/5/2020 2:12:00 PM

Aye, quite a delight to see one's grandchildren jumping in puddles and you found a great photo to illustrate it! I am reminded of how much my daughter loved her red Wellies! Yea for Yalto and your entry! Aloha! Rico

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/5/2020 12:57:00 PM

I enjoy the pure playfulness of your verse, such innocent joy expressed - best wishes for the contest!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/5/2020 8:09:00 AM

Connie, this is a sweet, delightful poem! Janice

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/5/2020 7:04:00 AM

Lovely my friend--a charming verse of joy.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/4/2020 6:53:00 PM

Wow, this is a beautiful Yalto, Connie!:-) I hope you try more of it! GL in the contest! Blessings xoxo

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/4/2020 8:21:00 PM

What a meaningful comment coming from the creator of this beautiful form! I really appreciate it Edward. I love your wonderful form and I will write more. Thank you very much my friend. Blessings xxoo