Connie Marcum Wong Poet Verse

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Splash

Splash

How I love
        to see you splash
                            grandchild.

You find puddles
        after rain such fun.

You float your
                 paper 
                          boat with joy.

I smile
      and I laugh
                 to see you
                           having so much fun.

You are my gift from God
         my
                sweetest Angel child.

6-4-20

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Splash Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann
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Vladislav Raven August 19, 2020 at 12:39 PM Hi Connie, it is wonderful to see how simply a child can find enjoyment and the joy parents or grandparents can get out of watching them. I caqn feel the joy through this wonderful write. You capture such wonderful moments with such ease.I always used to enjoy such things when I was a child. Brings back memories. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Heidi Sands June 12, 2020 at 3:30 PM Very nice Connie. So sweet. :)

Quoth Theraven June 11, 2020 at 9:03 AM Connie, Grand child's puddle, Grand parent's joy. You've made quite a nice 'Splash' with this poem. -Richard

Paul Callus June 9, 2020 at 4:12 PM You certainly take delight in watching your grandchild play and enjoy herself, Connie, and it shows in your words. I like the lovely accompanying visual, too. ~ Warm regards // paul

P.S. Awtry June 9, 2020 at 9:28 AM Nice yalto Connie! Children are God's reminder to just have fun! :)

Michael Tor June 8, 2020 at 8:22 PM Grandchildren bring us so much joy. Beautiful Connie. Blessings your way..

Sandra Adams June 6, 2020 at 10:40 PM I could see this one... love watching the innocence of children as they splash about in the rain... wonderful write my friend! hugs :)

Poet Destroyer A June 6, 2020 at 5:26 PM this is perfect and reminds me of my grandson. Connie, a soft and lovely write. Linda

John Watt June 6, 2020 at 3:19 AM Really wonderful write, Connie. Splashing water was such a fun thing to do as a child, be it in the pool, the bathtub, or a puddle. Love the cute picture too. I wish you all the best in the Splash contest (and Yalto too?) Appreciate your comments, my friend. Hugs ~ John

Andrea Dietrich June 5, 2020 at 5:44 PM awww, so sweet . You did GREAT with the form, Connie. Will you also use for Yalto entry? I want to do two contests with same poem but I never know which judges do not mind us doing that. In fact, I see three contests right now I could do using one poem!!

Ilene Bauer June 5, 2020 at 2:38 PM great picture to accompany this delightful poem, connie!

Rico Leffanta June 5, 2020 at 2:12 PM Aye, quite a delight to see one's grandchildren jumping in puddles and you found a great photo to illustrate it! I am reminded of how much my daughter loved her red Wellies! Yea for Yalto and your entry! Aloha! Rico

Michelle Faulkner June 5, 2020 at 12:57 PM I enjoy the pure playfulness of your verse, such innocent joy expressed - best wishes for the contest!

Janice Canerdy June 5, 2020 at 8:09 AM Connie, this is a sweet, delightful poem! Janice

Vijay Pandit June 5, 2020 at 7:04 AM Lovely my friend--a charming verse of joy.

Edward Ibeh June 4, 2020 at 6:53 PM Wow, this is a beautiful Yalto, Connie!:-) I hope you try more of it! GL in the contest! Blessings xoxo Connie Marcum Wong June 4, 2020 at 8:21 PM What a meaningful comment coming from the creator of this beautiful form! I really appreciate it Edward. I love your wonderful form and I will write more. Thank you very much my friend. Blessings xxoo