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I sit in golden gladness on the shore on this – an early summer peaceful day. Sun high in blue sky. Who could ask for more? My toes are children! Happily they play by wiggling down into the sun-kissed grains of sand into which I have dug my feet. Cool water of the ocean now ordains I take my feet and give them a nice treat. I run at waves – refreshment rolling fast! My feet, splish-splashing – leap! And the minutes fly. If only I could make this feeling last. I’d bottle it! When grey days happened by, I’d splash it on! Now back to the dry land, I run to plunge my toes again in sand. June 4, 2020 for the Splash Contest of Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 6/21/2020 2:16:00 PM
love this beautiful nostalgic but playful sonnet
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Date: 6/8/2020 2:12:00 AM
Super splashy sonnet of sunny summer skies, sand and surf. Sounds like my kind of day!
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Date: 6/6/2020 6:58:00 AM
This poem makes a giant splash in my mind. Well done! Bravo. Fun - loved the "toes as children".
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Date: 6/5/2020 11:31:00 PM
Hello Andrea … I've wrote this a number of times, but truly, your sonnets are something special - thanks again Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 6/5/2020 12:56:00 PM
Nothing beats that, blue sky, golden sand. Well written Andrea. Tom
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Date: 6/4/2020 11:08:00 PM
Andrea, Thoroughly enjoyed this poem and Summer by the sea and sand. If only you could bottle up the days. Now which little piggy went Wee, wee, wee, all the way home? -Richard
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/5/2020 4:48:00 PM
the one that got wettest!
Date: 6/4/2020 5:47:00 PM
You have described what my grandkids love doing best Andrea. I loved your charming entry I am hoping does great in the contest. xxoo
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Date: 6/4/2020 5:39:00 PM
Nothing like a splash in the sea, Very nicely penned Andrea..
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Date: 6/4/2020 5:18:00 PM
Hello Andrea, you made me feel like I was jumping the waves with you. Ah! That felt good!! Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 6/4/2020 5:14:00 PM
Great imagery you painted under a blue sky--splashing in ocean, Andrea. A lovely write this is.
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