Splash

SPLASH

the splendor raindrop —
a world of glass
in constant release.
from the kingdom cloud,
falling like a toddler-robin,
landing on an impressed leaf —
it applauds with reverence.
the raindrop swells broad shoulders
and a rainbow sheen.
though it clings, its grip loosens
and once again this parachute
free falls,
with an unburdened soul
landing in a puddle,
suffering the scrupulous squelch
of muddy water
placed at this exact moment
for the splash of ecstatic boots
worn by a preschool child.
the raindrop grins.

11/15/2018
The Raindrop Poetry Contest/Craig Cornish

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/16/2018 7:28:00 PM
What a GREAT job you did on the raindrop. I bet Craig will really enjoy this one in his contest. I sure did!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/16/2018 8:38:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 11/16/2018 8:16:00 AM
What a fun poem with lovely personification Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/16/2018 8:59:00 AM
Thank you, Jan! :) Kim
Date: 11/16/2018 7:27:00 AM
This was as beautiful as it was fun to read Kim. Best of luck in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/16/2018 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, Chris! :) Kim
Date: 11/15/2018 10:56:00 PM
Kim, this poem is so delightful! You have a wondrous imagination. Your ending left me smiling! I bet this entry will do well in the contest! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/16/2018 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, Connie! :) Kim
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