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Spitting Out Apples

holy peeping tom all seeing guy in the sky ogling mother earth ***

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 4/25/2021 4:13:00 PM
I fear big brother only to find he had a even bigger brother still . . . ; )
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Date: 4/13/2021 7:24:00 PM
Jeff Connelly's comment (below) is a tough act to follow. I'm somewhere way back in the rear view mirror. ~ CD seeds
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Date: 4/13/2021 8:48:00 AM
Of cores... HUGS
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Date: 4/14/2021 6:25:00 AM
LOL! ~x
Date: 4/10/2021 9:52:00 PM
You are definitely unique, Maureen. A lot of strangeness, sure, but I find your perspective engaging. All your poems are like riddles, trying to tease the reader with what information you give ... and what information you withhold. Creator in love with his own creation? (While the apples make me think of Eden).
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/12/2021 7:14:00 AM
That apple pops up often in my poetry, every poem a pome... the female condition perhaps? I used to believe what I was taught (catholic) until I found out I wasn’t taught everything (Lilith). Thank you for getting me.
Date: 4/10/2021 4:12:00 PM
Makes me think of someone hacking into your computer to spy on you!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/12/2021 7:15:00 AM
LOL! We always cover the cameras ;D,
Date: 4/4/2021 11:42:00 AM
His mother taught him to look not touch? Aloha! Rico
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/5/2021 6:23:00 AM
Do you think he listens to mother? ;), xomo
Date: 4/4/2021 9:29:00 AM
I love this, Maureen. A most interesting take and, I suppose, true. Who knows? It is so original!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/5/2021 6:25:00 AM
I only know I’m too small to know ;), Thank you! xomo

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