Spitting Out Apples

holy peeping tom
      all seeing guy in the sky
         ogling mother earth



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Indiana Shaw

Date: 4/25/2021 4:13:00 PM

I fear big brother only to find he had a even bigger brother still . . . ; )

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/13/2021 7:24:00 PM

Jeff Connelly's comment (below) is a tough act to follow. I'm somewhere way back in the rear view mirror. ~ CD seeds

Jeff Connelly

Date: 4/13/2021 8:48:00 AM

Of cores... HUGS

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 4/14/2021 6:25:00 AM

LOL! ~x

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/10/2021 9:52:00 PM

You are definitely unique, Maureen. A lot of strangeness, sure, but I find your perspective engaging. All your poems are like riddles, trying to tease the reader with what information you give ... and what information you withhold. Creator in love with his own creation? (While the apples make me think of Eden).

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 4/12/2021 7:14:00 AM

That apple pops up often in my poetry, every poem a pome... the female condition perhaps? I used to believe what I was taught (catholic) until I found out I wasn’t taught everything (Lilith). Thank you for getting me.