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Spitting Out Apples

holy peeping tom
      all seeing guy in the sky
         ogling mother earth



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Indiana Shaw

April 25, 2021 at 4:13 PM

I fear big brother only to find he had a even bigger brother still . . . ; )

Gershon Wolf

April 13, 2021 at 7:24 PM

Jeff Connelly's comment (below) is a tough act to follow. I'm somewhere way back in the rear view mirror. ~ CD seeds

Jeff Connelly

April 13, 2021 at 8:48 AM

Of cores... HUGS

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 14, 2021 at 6:25 AM

LOL! ~x

Timothy Hicks

April 10, 2021 at 9:52 PM

You are definitely unique, Maureen. A lot of strangeness, sure, but I find your perspective engaging. All your poems are like riddles, trying to tease the reader with what information you give ... and what information you withhold. Creator in love with his own creation? (While the apples make me think of Eden).

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 12, 2021 at 7:14 AM

That apple pops up often in my poetry, every poem a pome... the female condition perhaps? I used to believe what I was taught (catholic) until I found out I wasn’t taught everything (Lilith). Thank you for getting me.