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Spiritual Tree

Written: October 22, 2023 For Brian Stand Contest _____________________________________________ Lonesome gorgeous tree almost standing straight I discovered the splendor there decorative branches is wonderful can the candied sticks be in a pristine state? seems as if an old sled had demise standby there is a slouched spiritual book on the table a little light-weary tie a vivid crimson bow yet, loops let you feel loopy the angels' wing plumes fluttered the beard on saint was blown haywire teddy bear lays on his side after chasing pooh a blue drum, afar of perch, flips in on its thin legs the rocking horse doesn't rock just crouches in place the lighthouse appears extremely out of the setting the moon tipped over on its side an inside-the-tree-flying reindeer as well It seems the pinecones are around to oust saffron beads block the light from an elfin lamp jack-in-the-box is positioned parallel to the facade the nutcracker prince maintains there is a problem the gingerbread man is gaunt in his standing position the snowman lacks zest and lacks any sort of charisma utterly, the reindeer fails to eventuate and to be in charge gorgeous, isolated tree Inching its way toward decay bringing flawed beauty into the home and a profound gratitude for everything I have
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October 23, 2023 at 2:33 PM
WOW Lasaad ….such an outstanding poem cleverly written in the shape of a tree! You are so clever….Debx
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October 23, 2023 at 12:18 PM
Woah this is so creative, it must have taken you a while to perfect the shape.. the poem is also fitting for the shape.. as always you write a masterpiece, but you have drawn one here also..
Dutta Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 6:32 AM
Great idea to compose a wonderful poem on Christmas Tree in perfect shap. Sure to win TOP. Have Great Days.
Pandit Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 5:32 AM
WOW! what a creative shape!! Your poetic talents keep amazing me, my friend. Splendid details bring the tree to fore.
George Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 5:25 AM
You have made a lovely Christmas crib and a beautiful Christmas tree with festoons and coloful decorations Great poem in perfect shape of a tree ! Is it a little stale? Perhaps it needs to be replaced with a fresh tree and fresh adornments! You are so adept in shape poems too ! btw... I won't be able to read or comment on your poems as I will be away on a tour for ten days.
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October 23, 2023 at 5:45 AM
I'd like to express my gratitude to you, Valsa, for your thoughtful comment. I hope you have a wonderful tour and know that we will miss reading your poems. Take care
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October 23, 2023 at 2:22 AM
- A beautiful tree ... a Christmas-themed poem ... (a little too early for me ...:))) - Love the poem and shape ... best wishes in the contest, Las :) - Have a wonderful new week :) - hugs
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