Spiritual Gem Inside

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7.23pm June 4, 2025

Note: This poem wasn't entered in the contest. It came a bit late.

The Spiritual Gem

A gem more precious than gold A supreme treasure in this world Its brilliance is hard to see No one, not even you or me. It’s in my soul’s fathomless deep In profound reflections creep I feel its ardor love in silent hymn I hear its voice as I speak to Him. A calming balm that heals, peels Its passionate scent pacifies, reels A fervid rubdown alleviating my stress Drifting to constraints’ looseness. Oh, spiritual gem residing inside You give me strength, you’re my guide Your light shines zealously forever An indivisible link to my Heavenly Father.

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Valsa George

Date: 7/4/2025 10:25:00 PM

Yes, there is a priceless gem within each of us. Beautifully written dear Len. The easy rhyme and smooth flow make it a great composition.

Len Gasun
Date: 7/5/2025 11:07:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend. Blessings to you always. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/4/2025 9:24:00 AM

WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Yes, "Spiritual Gem Inside" is our Heavenly Father. Hope you are OK... "Good Luck" I also did this contest. Hugs... Have a very blessed day writing away.........

Len Gasun
Date: 7/5/2025 11:04:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comment and your warm wishes my dear poet friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Good luck to you as well. Hugs