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Spirits

haunted, moon’s on the cliff,
orchestrating the waves —
she studies them.

did you know the water turns green,
the thunderclaps like cymbals?

shroud hangs like a towel
over her right arm,
bare feet
long to jump —
to fall, be wild with the wind.
tangled greenbrier hair,

she’s a Magdalene figure,
with archaic spirits
that dare her to fling
herself into the jet stream.

the tiniest voice
freezes her like a statue.
the rain melts her gaze.
she blinks;
the spell dispelled.

she nearly slips
as if tangled in seaweed,
her fingers claw the wet wall,
she weeps.

falls asleep just outside danger,
dreams a dream —
a waterfall,
tears rush forth
in colorful tones.

suddenly...
a stranger
in the thicket...

one day after sorrows...
she’s being dunked in the water...
reborn in the sunlight…

11/16/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Proxenos Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 9:10 AM
You are very talented Kim, so creative and thought provoking, your words are like crystal drops in the 'waterfall where tears rush forth in colorful tones' So brilliantly crafted. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 12:57 PM
So nice of you to throw my words back my way. Big hug!
Mcintosh Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 6:31 AM
I LOVE this!!! Such a masterpiece of creativity and art! I love love love it... God bless you with many many more
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 12:55 PM
Thank you… Thank you… Thank you!
One Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 4:07 AM
Great introspection and so deeply felt, this is another brilliant write, I see you have been full of inspiration.. All sorrows pass, just like all other emotions...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 12:54 PM
Waves of emotions...we all have them. Thank you, Silent!
Rose  Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 3:47 AM
Your words are like sunlight in itself, beautiful display of poetry Kim, thank you for sharing your talent, stay well, xo
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 12:54 PM
Thank you so much, sweet lady!
Buehler Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 9:07 PM
Very lovely, Kim. I enjoyed this bit of enchantment. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 12:54 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Crabtree Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 2:23 PM
Beautifully written, Kim. I enjoyed it! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 6:24 PM
Thank you, Angela!
Sands Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 10:28 AM
Wow, I found this poem to be powerful and with a great ending. Well written!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 10:53 AM
Thank you, Heidi!
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