Ken Carroll Poet Free verse

Spirit Walk

I am asleep
I dream
I am flying

I am the sky
outside myself
above streets and buildings

Time and place
do not exist
I am moonlight
staring back at the sun

Updrafts of light
echoes off distant plateaus
above the blue earth
into the sparkling void

Walking up the stars
through the nine heavens
and all nine earths

I am me
set free
so astally
in a sea of ecstasy....

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Lucilla Carrillo October 12, 2013 at 4:07 PM Hola Ken; Como estas? I see that you are alright on a beautiful trip. Beautiful poem.... Lucilla Ken Carroll October 12, 2013 at 4:14 PM Buen dia Lucilla, Muy bien gracias! gracias por leer!! Respecto, Ken

Donna Jones October 12, 2013 at 7:36 AM Hey Ken....really enjoyed this....takes to a feeling where my grandpa used to take me telling me stories about our Cherokee ancestors... Ken Carroll October 12, 2013 at 9:45 AM Hi Donna, Thanks for the wonderful comment. Ken

Jesse James Forster October 8, 2013 at 12:51 AM Hey Ken good to see you here too my friend. I didnt realize how many of well I guess I were here and as I have already said this is an excellent write that stimulates imagination. Always a pleasure...Jesse Ken Carroll October 8, 2013 at 6:05 AM Hi Jesse, Thanks buddy and good to see you here.. Ken

Kelly Deschler October 7, 2013 at 2:42 PM I have had that dream where I was flying, high amongst the clouds and the stars. Too bad though, that I had to wake up and realize that it was not reality. This poem was a very relaxing and calming one to read. Wonderful work, Ken!...Thank you very much for the nice comments! Ken Carroll October 7, 2013 at 2:50 PM Hi Kelly, Thank you for the wonderful visit and compliment.. Ken

Sara Kendrick October 7, 2013 at 11:23 AM What a beautiful and exciting dream..I always wonder what it would like to float upon a cloud..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting..Sara Ken Carroll October 7, 2013 at 11:39 AM Hi Sara, Thanks for your comments and visit as well.. Ken