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Spirit Sightless Man

Can't see COLD DARK BLACKEN EMPTY SOUL I call you out of suffer, first; Can't see I placed your flesh upon this earth; And for all, in awe your worth; You're birth in unrighteousness you're cursed; Can't talk So you redeem, you dream in oceans; Can't walk Watered down passages desert sands; Opened minded Open up hopes sorrows place, it lands; Can't see On mountain sins spirit sightless man
12/17/19 Placed #2 in Contest For STRAND SPECIAL 4 Any form, any Theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 12/22/2019 10:22:00 AM
This is one of those rare poems whose words can convey multiple meanings--quite provocative! Congrats--and a joyous Christmas and 2020 to you and yours.
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 12/22/2019 3:44:00 PM
Thanks L. J. blessings and peace wonderful season and New Year toward you and yours also... James
Date: 12/18/2019 3:52:00 PM
Congrats to your winning poem James
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 12/22/2019 3:43:00 PM
Thank ever so Gregory...and write on James
Date: 12/17/2019 12:24:00 PM
He sometimes get to see Spirit before he goes...Nice concept
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 12/17/2019 12:51:00 PM
thanks Arturo.. Peace and Blessing to you Write On James : )

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