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Spirit Quest

silent
spirit voices
signal present dolens
gently shaping thermy plenum
genomes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/5/2009 1:28:00 PM
nice shape, good cinquain
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Date: 9/5/2009 5:28:00 AM
Spirit voices are not silent to everyone right? Interesting Cinquain. Sara
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Date: 9/5/2009 12:51:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Jim.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/4/2009 6:59:00 PM
Yes, thats like the hypersynchronicity of the spirit's sacred zero point, written in the language of unity, which defies external observation! Like the center of a truth, You must be in it to see it! Smile, Sincerely Moses THANKS FOR YOUR GRACIOUS COMMENTS ON MY POETRY, ALWAYS WELCOME AND APPREIATED, MOSES
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Date: 9/4/2009 10:40:00 AM
Beautifully poised. Thank you for commenting my poem. All the best.
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Date: 9/4/2009 8:25:00 AM
Magical and mystical! You are full of surprises, James! ~ :) Carrie
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Date: 9/4/2009 8:00:00 AM
I am so happy to be reading your excellent poetry today Jim. I thank you for sharing it here at the Soup. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2009 6:21:00 AM
Wow..nicley done Jimbo...love the language in this piece.
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Date: 9/4/2009 5:35:00 AM
This is magnificent, James. I think we spend our entire lives listening to the "spirit voices"that help us find our path in our spiritual journeys. Great cinquain! Awesome style, James. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/4/2009 2:52:00 AM
What a poet you are, excellent write
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Date: 9/4/2009 12:47:00 AM
Loved the alliteration, nice job...Raul
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Date: 9/3/2009 11:37:00 PM
Like the alliteration Jim,thanks for your welcome blog comments.Rgds Brian
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